Own your frame

The girl in the small photo I do know. The one on the page I do not.

Are you man enough to make a play for her?


Take her off that pedestal
She doesn't belong up there
Treating her like a Goddess
won't get you anywhere

In many ways she's ordinary
and screwed up just like you
With a body to kill for
and an a*s to make you drool

She's Aphrodite's daughter
She walks like sex in heat
She's all your carnal fantasies
And she talks like Sesame street

She has a daddy complex
She's weak around hot guys
her self esteem is shaky
She hates her own dress size

She's easily manipulated
She isn't all that bright
She lacks any creativity
She's fucked up every night

She's got a smoking body
She drives the guys insane
but if you let her know that
You're going down the drain

So don't tell her how hot she is
or feed her bullshit clever lines
She's seen and heard all you got
She get's bird dogged all the time

The only thing you have to do
To have some decent game
No pick up lines or fancy talk
Just be real and own your frame

You're a man so act like one
You have a dick and that's okay
So own your masculine energy
and you'll do better right away

Walk like you got some cajones
Be the Alpha male of the pack
You don't need money or muscles
If your attitude's on track

No need to be a Macho a*****e
or have magnetism like Johnny Depp
Just be the sexual man you are
and you'll build a solid rep

A woman craves a masculine force
To come into her life and take her
That takes nerve and audacity
  She knows if you're a faker

So don't beg her or ask permission
That isn't what she wants from you
Take her like you f*****g mean it
That's what she wants you to do

You were terrified of being rejected
Be her friend you kept insisting
You lost the girl you always wanted
Because you weren't listening

She gave you plenty of signals
and you bungled all her tests
She opened the window for ya
and you stood there in arrest

When she shut that window
there was no second chance
You're a Eunuch to her now
So there goes your romance

Now she has a boyfriend
An insufferable Macho jerk
When you see her out with him
You want to go berserk

You finally get your nerve up
and say who are you anyway
That big a*****e turns around
and says I'm Baby Ricochet

Author's Note

Yes I know I've made this point before

Reviews

[JDM]

I'd make a play for her. But then again, I've got game. ;-) Excellent job, Ricochet. Are you preparing this for a spoken word performance?

[Baby Ricochet]

I've never done a spoken word performance. Thanks for stopping by JDM

[Marie]

Yes you've made it, and you keep on making it. I guess you have a right...

[Baby Ricochet]

HA! Thanks for dropping by Marie

[Salar Majak]

haha
i liked the ending
how moral XD

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you Aurora

[Salar Majak]

you're welcome

[KAOlmsted]

There is a lot of truth in this. And how dare you say you don't know me, that just hurts my feelings xD (I had a tan :-p) Great stuff, Baby.

[Baby Ricochet]

HA! Thank you Kimmer.

[KAOlmsted]

;-) Always my pleasure...

[AYVID N]

This poem is a brilliant piece of wisdom Baby.
For the first time I have a little suggestion. Hope you dont mind.

You're a man so act like one
You have a dick and that's okay

- Could it be... "You're a man so act like one
Its you who has the dick, It's you who has the say"

Otherwise superb. Loved it and agree with all of it.

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you for your feedback Divya. I do appreciate it

[quinfinn]

i can't compete with that! quite honestly, you have some very real and true statements herein, but this doesn't define all women. and i have no patience and very little tolerance for little miss...."prove something to me" sure, they may be nice to look at but i like a woman with a functioning IQ and a mature swagger (or is it "sashay" in the female world?). however, there is no denying that this is both a clever, realistic and very nicely penned piece of humorous writing. way to go, ricochet!

[Baby Ricochet]

The stanzas highlighting a particular girl's short comings are to make a point about a phenomenon I call "p***y blind." A curious trait shared by many men who will suddenly become oblivious to a girl's shortcomings because they want her so much it hurts. Girls know all about p***y blindness and they rely on it quite a bit when judging a man's character. To her a p***y blind man is weak. So when she gives you s**t (and she will) you gotta stand up to her which to her is a man standing up for himself. To her that's real masculine strength and that's what she wants to see in a man.

[quinfinn]

oh , for sure....in my neck of the woods we call it "p***y brain" . you have exemplified that well here.

[Carolann Dowsett]

Amusing in a very Ricochet sort of way :) Nicely written.

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you Carolann

[Carolann Dowsett]

Welcome Mark.

[Jack...]

Now who's up on the pedestal? Very funny and real.

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you Jack

[Pete Langley]

You have real pulling power man. P.

[Baby Ricochet]

I've been shot down about 80000 times too.

[Pete Langley]

:)

[N!LoC]

fact or fiction?

[Baby Ricochet]

There's a lot going on in this piece. Which part do you mean

[N!LoC]

the last paragraph... and also generally...

[Baby Ricochet]

The last Stanza's my style of cocky humor. The message of the piece is completely true. Most women love men and the more potent a man's masculine energy is the better. That force emanates from him out of his character. That's why money and big muscles isn't necessary. (Coming from someone with big muscles it doesn't exactly handicap you either. Particularly with black girls.) The part about a masculine force coming into her life and taking her is about seducing her in a way that's really exciting for her. It starts from the moment you say hi to her all the way to the bedroom and there's nothing "nice boy lap dog" about it. A man's gotta have some fire in him to pull it off consistently. Women love some unpredictability and mystery in a man and they love, love, love the anticipation towards sex.
Half the time that's more exciting than the sex is to them. All those things drive men crazy. We want it now and with no surprises. Personally I don't consider myself to be some kind of player or anything like that. I've no kind of system or anything and I've been shot down a million times. I've had some success with this partly because I've no problem striking up conversations with women I don't know and I've no problem with cold feet moving her from hi to sex as quickly as possible. A lot of guys freeze. Not me