Own your frame

The girl in the small photo I do know. The one on the page I do not.

Are you man enough to make a play for her?


Take her off that pedestal
She doesn't belong up there
Treating her like a Goddess
won't get you anywhere

In many ways she's ordinary
and screwed up just like you
With a body to kill for
and an a*s to make you drool

She's Aphrodite's daughter
She walks like sex in heat
She's all your carnal fantasies
And she talks like Sesame street

She has a daddy complex
She's weak around hot guys
her self esteem is shaky
She hates her own dress size

She's easily manipulated
She isn't all that bright
She lacks any creativity
She's fucked up every night

She's got a smoking body
She drives the guys insane
but if you let her know that
You're going down the drain

So don't tell her how hot she is
or feed her bullshit clever lines
She's seen and heard all you got
She get's bird dogged all the time

The only thing you have to do
To have some decent game
No pick up lines or fancy talk
Just be real and own your frame

You're a man so act like one
You have a dick and that's okay
So own your masculine energy
and you'll do better right away

Walk like you got some cajones
Be the Alpha male of the pack
You don't need money or muscles
If your attitude's on track

No need to be a Macho a*****e
or have magnetism like Johnny Depp
Just be the sexual man you are
and you'll build a solid rep

A woman craves a masculine force
To come into her life and take her
That takes nerve and audacity
  She knows if you're a faker

So don't beg her or ask permission
That isn't what she wants from you
Take her like you f*****g mean it
That's what she wants you to do

You were terrified of being rejected
Be her friend you kept insisting
You lost the girl you always wanted
Because you weren't listening

She gave you plenty of signals
and you bungled all her tests
She opened the window for ya
and you stood there in arrest

When she shut that window
there was no second chance
You're a Eunuch to her now
So there goes your romance

Now she has a boyfriend
An insufferable Macho jerk
When you see her out with him
You want to go berserk

You finally get your nerve up
and say who are you anyway
That big a*****e turns around
and says I'm Baby Ricochet

Author's Note

Yes I know I've made this point before

Reviews

[Dream Weaver]

Great title, enjoyed the clever rhyme scheme which I just happen to be a big fan of rhyme. As for the write I think it's brilliant my brother and very entertaining to say the least... Nicely done.

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you Dream Weaver

[Mary Christabel George]

WOW......!
A wonderful description of self & of the happenings around.
You started with the description of women one desires then how a man has to be & treat her & then you laded up concluding how it was all lost.
:-)

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you Mary

[Mary Christabel George]

Welcome Baby

[Annabelle Lee]

Haha. lady killer, lady stealer, sweetheart, writer, jerk, softie. is there anything you can't do?

[Baby Ricochet]

Ha! Oh my sure there is. Thanks Annabelle

[Muse]

Did you read the guide to 3rd base 101?

[Baby Ricochet]

Never heard of it. Muse it flatters me to no end to know you read my work. Thank you

[Tai Ryens]

You fondly remind me of a lobster. Very durable on the outside, but soft on the inside. And that's a good thing, believe me.

[Baby Ricochet]

HA! Thanks Tai

[Richard Man]

Man it's not your muscles and your alpha wolfishness that gets them smiling .... that's just packaging and advertising.... Now it's your wit and humour: high quality USP.... that's what gets those chiquitas squeaking long after you've swept them off their feet.

I, BR, am a charmer who gets them yes-ing because it's the obvious thing to do. Fresh fruit is so good for you.

[Baby Ricochet]

Keeps ya regular. Thanks for stopping by

[Frieda P]

Sometimes I'm not sure if I want to slap you, hug you or bring you home and make you a home cooked meal...whatever, always a strong read from you Baby. ;-)

[Baby Ricochet]

Oh that's to funny. Thanks for dropping by Frieda.

[Frieda P]

So what do you want for dinner, I'm not making egg whites! ;-)

[Baby Ricochet]

Pot roast. I love pot roast and haven't had it in ages

[Emerald Seas]

Had to stop over and read some of your work. Chuckling a little as I can see the scenario unfolding. Strong writing.

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you Que Sera Sera

[.]

Awesome right. Your rhyming and flow of the poem is so playful and inviting. Great job --as always.

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you Cord

[.]

Write* wow its been a long day lol

[Michael G.]

Very strong write, as usual, BR.

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you Mr G.