Have you ever gotten a moment of clarity and you could see through the veil your ego throws up and for just a moment you touched divinity? This is one of those moments for me
Quickie phone write. I have these moments where out of the blue I can hear God. I don't mean Gods "talking to me" or I'm speaking in tongues or some bullshit like that. I mean like suddenly everything makes stupid simple sense as if a 4 year old would know it. Like just genuinely love everyone for no good reason. Sometimes I'm amazed how much God can put up with from me and still show up from out of nowhere and make me say, Damn, why do I ignore you most of the time? I'm retarded
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I feel like this sometimes...mostly your author's note; like, why have I abandoned my faith? I mean, I know why I abandoned my religion, my Catholicism, but why have I abandoned my faith? This is an incredibly thought provoking piece...one which has made me examine my own core values, and I cannot thank you enough for that.
I am joining a Baptist church. It has changed my life and I'm excited to learn about God the correct.. read moreI am joining a Baptist church. It has changed my life and I'm excited to learn about God the correct way, bible study groups. Awesome. Being with others who believe and live the life, walk the talk. Thanks for listening
Linda
So sweet to read your soft side... Life has a way of reaching out to you!..."Hello, it's God here"... sometimes you just need to stop and smell the roses or enjoy the sunshine to be touched by divinity. This is a wonderful write, my friend!
well, this is certainly an inspired piece, and quite a departure form your usual style, but it speaks volumes and is just awesome in its message. the couplet format is very effective and the words just seem to be inspired by divine intervention. ricochet, this is a beautiful write. you may color me immensely impressed!
This one is a different read from you, sounds like you're coming from a very good place...'what's love got to do with it?'...came to mind. Just saying, nice one BR! ;-)
:) i feel that, absolutly do, and i agree with you, sometimes you just have to close your eyes and see with your heart the amazing things this world has to offer, God is love, care and simply heart satisfaction
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