Girlfriend in the shower

My girlfriend's in the shower
She'll take about an hour
I'll f**k around with my phone
See if anyone's home
Check up on writerscafe
What crap got posted today
Some RRs in my box
Review them maybe not
Some of them are good
Some just never should
Every jerkoff's a critic
Reviews that are acidic
Ricochet's flip remarks
That dipshit's just all bark
He doesn't have the bite
He doesn't know how to write
These rhymes just f*****g blow
And he doesn't seem to know
She turned her hair drier on
So I'll say so long
God what a crappy poem
Maybe I'll write zen koans

Reviews

[Lina Grey]

only an hour? Jeez... XD nice poem Baby. I love your rhymes, even if they blow

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you lina

[Lina Grey]

:)

[Carolann Dowsett]

Another witty poem :)

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you carolann

[Carolann Dowsett]

Welcome

[quinfinn]

i don't think it's crappy at all, in fact, i think it is quite witty and relevant. many men out there will relate. i know i did. and the ladies will love it too. you hit the nail on the head with many of your statements about w/c.....what an adventure this place can be, huh? well done, ricochet!

[quinfinn]

already jumped on it ricochet, an hour ago.....very good poem! my review is on there......

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you quinfinn