A simple Muse

For Lexus

         You're such a simple muse
         My uncomplicated lover
       My faithful little concubine
       I know there's not another

         Simple trusting charming
        Sweet as sweet could be
         Another willing playmate
        For the horny likes of me

        You think I'm oh so funny
     My war stories make you crawl
     You love the soothing sound
   of my deep set southern drawl

     You love the way I touch you
     Eager hands caress your skin
      Such a graceful curvy body
       Oh you delicious little sin

     You smell like cocoa butter
      You taste like Tangerines
     Such a warm inviting body
     Such a tasty little dream

      I'm a crazy kind of lover
       To f**k you like I do
    Then I'm sweet and gentle
     and whisper love to you

  Whisper that you're beautiful
     Whisper that you're mine
    Whisper all sorts of things
     That get into your mind

   I know what you're craving
  The excitement you long for
   It's not about commitment
       It's all about amore

 I'm so happy to have found you
     I might have past you by
 You're such a little sweet heart
  You make me swoon and sigh

      My ever faithful lover
      My savory little tart
     Just a simple minded muse
   With such a beautiful heart

Author's Note

I cranked this out pretty quick. A couple of the rhymes are kinda hokey. Maybe it needs editing. Fuck, I don't know.

Reviews

[Epipsychologist]

I liked this one a lot. A*s always gets your mind going, haha.

[Baby Ricochet]

Yes she does. Thank you for the review Epispsychologist

[Monster ^.^]

You really have fun rhyming, don't you? hahaha, I guess that's one of your signature ways in writing! and as always, a very good read :)

[Baby Ricochet]

Raised on Rap. Thank you for the review monster

[Tai Ryens]

Doesn't seem.. you, though it does have the hint of rough/kinky sex.

[Baby Ricochet]

HA! Thank you Tai

[Ayvid N]

This is just so good. But does not sound like the ususal you...
A message from Cosmos...? That even bad guys change
...There's still hope then :)

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you DN

[saratogaparty]

Damn you, you made me miss the feeling.
Love I mean, or whatever.

You described it so well now I miss it.

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you Saratoga

[Inda]

This is sweet, a nice change of pace; Love it!

[Baby Ricochet]

thank you inda

[N!LoC]

gosh rico.. this almost sounds like u actually have the capability to love .... mmm hell must have frozen over or something... did the meteor from Russia manage to hit u on the head? lol

[Baby Ricochet]

HA! Maybe. Thanks for stopping by N!LoC

[Frieda P]

Hell yeah, the boys' finally given in again. Love is hokey, that's the best part of it, when you're out of your f*****g mind and you don't really care. This is yet another side of Ricochet....never know who I'm gonna get when I sign on to your poetry. This is off the charts good and all that jazz! Love it.

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you Frieda

[KAOlmsted]

And to think it all started with the rinse cycle ;-) This is crazy good, Baby. Like insanely exceptional. Like this write has made me bat s**t box of frogs mad dogs and Englishmen mentally unstable. Phenomenal. I am actually giving you a standing O...The title absolutely rocks...everything after that...rolls, baby, rolls...I'm cinching up my straight jacket now. You've written my f*****g brains out.

[Baby Ricochet]

HA! Thanks lil MILF

[KAOlmsted]

So very welcome, Baby boy ;-)

[quinfinn]

okay, that settles it. it is now official. baby ricochet is one of the best writers on this site! you know, you have a warriors soul and a playboy heart, but....there is a gentle and artistic side to you that comes out in your writing and i have a feeling that many ladies love reading you because they know what i do about you. this one goes into my library, because it is, quite simply, that f*****g good!

[Baby Ricochet]

Thanks quinfinn. I'm genuinely flattered

[quinfinn]

this is genuinely impressive. you should be proud.