Friends

Friends

A Poem by Baby Ricochet

I have dead friends
Never far from my mind
That was another life

© 2013 Baby Ricochet


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Very deep. I can honestly feel the emotions in this poem. Great job and dedication to everyone we lose

Posted 11 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

11 Years Ago

thank you cord
What makes this so good is the universal concept embedded in the first and last line. I liked it.

Posted 11 Years Ago


One of your best maybe? I felt heart in this poem.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

11 Years Ago

Maybe. Thanks for stopping by Muse
Muse

11 Years Ago

awee...but you are still screaming at me!
"To missing friends..."


Posted 11 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

11 Years Ago

Clink our glasses in silence
Chris

11 Years Ago

At times the ghosts crowd close...and you hear them.
The best you can do is honor their memory. There "will" be more.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Yes. Well done.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

11 Years Ago

Thanks
This is like sharp sinking pain in my stomach.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Intensely true, those we love who have died are never far from our minds.

Posted 11 Years Ago


me too.

I feel like the last line is like they're from distant memories, so it's almost like you were a different person at the time you knew them. They are still a part of you, though.

Posted 11 Years Ago


I do too.

I don't think you meant what Tai stated, though that's a very good thought too...

Posted 11 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

11 Years Ago

No, I didn't. That's okay. Tai"s one of my favorite writers on this site and if that's how he read i.. read more

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Baby Ricochet
Baby Ricochet

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