Shake and Bake

Shake and Bake

A Story by Baby Ricochet
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A fire fight that ended with a really big bang.

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We were pinned under a highway overpass by repressive fire coming from a building that was approximately 150 meters away at a hard 45 degree angle to our east side. It wasn't the best of positions to be in so far as laying an effective field of fire is concerned. We couldn't get a clear shot at hajji unless we moved out of our defensive position from under the overpass and he couldn't get a clear shot at us so long as we stayed put. Out of frustration hajji started slamming RPG's into the overpass which was a stupid waste of ammo. We thought that was funny. Dumb little hajji wasting his RPG's on reenforced concrete and steel. That was three stooges s**t to us. Despite hajji's comic relief there was the very real threat of him dropping heavy mortar rounds onto the overpass. If he did we'd be in a world of s**t so we needed a plan. We did have a clear shot at a window in the building from behind the two overpass pillars that were closest to hajji's field of fire so we radioed command to request permission to use a shake and bake strike. A shake and bake is a combination of high explosive ordinance and White phosphorus (WP) flammable ordinance that creates in instant monster of a fire ball by sucking all the oxygen out of an enclosed space. Anyone in that space lungs are instantly sucked flat by the severe pressure drop a second before they're incinerated by a white hot fire ball. It's a f**k brutal way to go, but it is quick. Command gave us the go ahead on the shake and bake so we unloaded the rockets, engaged them and sent two Marines over to the pillars to fire them. The first Marine fired the explosive rocket and the second fired the WP on a count of five after the first rocket and we all dove for cover. I jumped behind a TRAK vehicle, plastered my a*s into the ground with my back against one of the TRAK's large metal wheels. I had just closed my eyes and covered my ears when I felt my lungs contract from the sudden pressure drop as oxygen rushed passed me into the beast we had just unleashed. There was an all encompassing roar as a ground shaking force went screaming around the TRAK followed by a blast of blistering heat. My body shook and convulsed from the fury of it all. It was like being on top of a Tornado made out of fire. After a few moments I tried to get up. The chemical stench of white phosphorus was burning my nostrils and throat as my lungs gasped for oxygen to purge the toxic stench that was permeating them. My ears itched and were ringing as I violently coughed for a few moments. My chest hurt from the strain. I got up on my feet and peered around the back of the TRAK. There was a blazing inferno where the building had been and the heat was prickly against my face. I could feel the heat through my Kevlar vest and I was glad to be wearing field goggles. I lightly slapped my ears with cupped hands in an effort to control the ringing. Other Marines were appearing from out of cover. Some were still coughing and rubbing their watery eyes from the irritation caused by the WP. The man closest to the blast who had fired the high explosive rocket was still in his crouched firing position behind the pillar. I was amazed he hadn't been knocked flat by the blast. We had scored the perfect shot so as if on queue we all started waving our weapons in the air cheering and shouting "F**K YEAH!! GET SOME!!" The grunt's shout out for all that's good in life. Sex, alcohol and annihilating his enemy. We radioed command to report the target had been eliminated. We were ordered to hold our position while waiting for another rapid deployment force and await further orders.
    As the occupation of Iraq dragged on shake and bake strikes became increasingly controversial with critics of the war and humanitarian groups focused on the plight of civilians in war torn regions of the world. The UN considered WP ordinance a chemical weapon and accused the US of violating the chemical weapons ban our government had sworn to uphold. The US denied WP was a chemical weapon as the weapon wasn't indiscriminate and didn't kill with toxic gas or fumes. As the US policy changed in Iraq shake and bake strikes were eliminated as to excessive with collateral damage being to severe for a civilian population constantly caught up in the crossfire between the Mujahedeen and the US sledge hammer. Neither side could afford the civilian casualties that were piling up as both sides needed to win hearts and minds to be successful. The Mujahedeen realized murdering locals was as bad a strategy as the US realized blasting the f**k out of everything in site was counterproductive as well.
    The Explosion from a shake and bake strike was like nothing I'd ever seen. It was more like blinding vengeance delivered by a wrathful old testament Deity than so many of the other strikes I had witnessed. There was no doubt to the brutality of shake and bake but war is a brutal business.

© 2013 Baby Ricochet


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Baby Ricochet
I've not had much practice with writing stories. If you read this thank you and I hope you enjoyed it.

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Well done. I like that this is told in such a way that it does not...and let me choose my words wisely here...I think "preach" is a fitting word...I like that it doesn't preach about the use of WP during the Iraq/Afghanistan war; it merely provides a first hand account of what went down that day under that overpass. The personal experience shines through in this piece. The gallows humor in the beginning, the bit about the RPGs, can only come from someone who lived through it. My only suggestion would be perhaps you might consider with your next piece of exposition trying to write in paragraphs. There are natural breaks in this piece that could be turned into new paragraphs. The only reason I bring it up is because I really want you to be the best writer you can be, and I want people to read you...a big block of text is intimidating to some ;-) At any rate...exceptional write. Thank you for sharing your experience with us.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

11 Years Ago

I guess it could use a couple paragraphs. I've not had much practice writing stories. Thank you for .. read more
KAOlmsted

11 Years Ago

Always my pleasure, Baby.
I thought this was a very strong story, and a valiant attempt for your first effort. It was not what I was expecting either, the subject took me by surprise. I was expecting light entertainment and humour, but I guess that's my own fault for expecting that from you. I'll be on guard when I read your writing from now on, as you've proven that we should never expect you to behave in a certain way any longer!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

11 Years Ago

Thank you LA. I'm pleased you enjoyed it
Title was clever, I liked this. First hand writing from first hand experience of horror. Well done

Posted 11 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

11 Years Ago

Thank you Willow.
Yes I really enjoyed it. It was a very interesting account of usage of a weapon, which was quite explosive but had it's uses in times of scarce options in a deadly and brutal war-torn battle field. I think all's fair in war.

I'm also awed by the testing times and horrors you went through and I salute the grit and tenacity of you and all your fellow soldeirs on the Iraqi battlefield.


Posted 11 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

11 Years Ago

Thank you DN
AYVID N

11 Years Ago

welcome.
this is awesome

Posted 11 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

11 Years Ago

Thank you kelsey
Well written, though disturbing in regards to the senseless violence of war. It's very healing to write, like a purging of the soul.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

11 Years Ago

thank you carolann
Carolann Dowsett

11 Years Ago

Welcome
I think it's a pretty good story. Your punctuation and gammar and spelling are fine. and you have an entertaining style.

Not the subject matter I prefer, but war is brutal.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

11 Years Ago

Thank you Marie. I appreciate it
Dude I love to write and read stories..and you write really well...very horribly expressive of the shake and bake attacks and the total annihilation of War....

Posted 11 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

11 Years Ago

Thank you Mr moon
Thanks for sharing this, very educational as I never knew this was actually used.
You could write a memoir of your time in the service; some of your
Pieces feel like that to me.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

11 Years Ago

Thank you inda

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