Goddamn Roaches

Goddamn Roaches

A Poem by Baby Ricochet




        I killed ten thousand roaches
        There were thousands more
         There must be a secret lair
             I haven't seen before

       They crawl across the ceiling
           From out of little holes
     They baptize all their off spring
       in my dumb cat's water bowl

     They move around my furniture
         in the middle of the night
          All my s**t is rearranged
      You know that just ain't right

   They have turf wars in the kitchen
        The pots and pans they fly
     They car jacked a Verizon Van
         They rob all passers by

       I use every spray imaginable
          Banned FDA pesticides
        A secret unstable formula
      Made from old formaldehyde

    I went flame thrower on their asses
   Constructed from a lighter and spray
      I incinerated many thousands
       and still they won't go away

       This war is unconditional
       The outcome is unknown
        Next I'm going Kamikazi
      Strappin on predator drone



© 2013 Baby Ricochet


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ahahahaha...I enjoyed this poem.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

10 Years Ago

Thanks for stopping by
Fun read... which reminds me, i must get to the store to get some spray... Too late-a bunch of 'em just took off with my damned car!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

11 Years Ago

HA! Thank you Mary
Funny, funky, fuzzy, crazy, nice, just like mice, are the roaches. You created a good atmosphere

Posted 11 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

11 Years Ago

Thank you Clive
Clive D Costa

11 Years Ago

Ur welcome. pls check out my stories and poems
In a way, you've described one of my fears - being overrun by rogue roaches. That's one unusual piece of work and I love it. Thanks for sharing.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

11 Years Ago

Thank you Jeremy
can't believe i missed this the first time.

i want a sequel!

very descriptive...and wonderful war analogy.

jacob

Posted 11 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

11 Years Ago

Thank you Jacob
jacob erin-cilberto

11 Years Ago

now, every night, i'm listening for the sounds.

much like army people in trenches liste.. read more
Baby Ricochet

11 Years Ago

Ha!
Great humor !

Posted 11 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

11 Years Ago

Thank you Mr Martin
Renée

11 Years Ago

it was a pleasure... Miss Ricochet
Baby Ricochet

11 Years Ago

HA!
ROACHES FROM HELL: stay tuned!
Hilarious I really enjoyed reading this

Posted 11 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

11 Years Ago

Thank you Mercanta
That was very interesting ans unique. i don't believe I have ever read anything quite like this before, but I like it. Your choice of words helps create an image in my head. I can almost see someone just going crazy because of roaches. I remember when I liked on a ranch we just couldn't seem to keep the flies and roaches away. My mother was so frantic and she bug-bommed all the time. Eventually, she gave up because they just wouldn't die! When I moved out, I mannaged to keep them out of the new house with this peppermint hemp soap. I love the second to last stanza; it completely describes what it is like trying to get rid of these pests. Thought this poem is sort of gross, I enjoyed reading it. The only suggestion I have it to fix your tenses. In the fifth stanze it says " I used..." and then in the next stanza, you wrote "I went...". In this case it should all be in the past tense. So, it would be" I used". But...I don't know, it maight have just been a typo. All-in-all, this poem is great. Keep it up!!!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

11 Years Ago

Thank you Missy
Missy Lorraine

11 Years Ago

Haha...no problem!
LOL :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

11 Years Ago

Thanks Kailor
Love this , no crit just praise for a write well done!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

11 Years Ago

Thank you len

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Baby Ricochet
Baby Ricochet

Tampa, FL



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