The Trickster Senryu

If this senryu annoyed you
When you counted the syllables
You need to get laid

Reviews

[Robbie~xoxo~]

LOL... :D
It's a bad habit, but I do find myself counting.....I'm just sayin'. :P

[Baby Ricochet]

Ha!

[KeeD]

LMAO, It didn't annoy me but I still need to get laid. Thank you sir, This just made my day :P

[Baby Ricochet]

HA! Thanks bro.

[Lina Grey]

ha! ...I'm not getting laid anytime soon though. I just counted the syllables because you pointed it out. How was I to know it would have annoyed me? lol funny Baby

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you

[Michael G.]

Just sayin', (with humor)

"It did bother me
but I don't need an excuse...
to get myself laid."

[Baby Ricochet]

Ha!

[Seamstress]

who in the world is so anal that they count the syllables of everything they read?

[Baby Ricochet]

Write some Haikus and senryus. You'll find out

[Ama May Cooper]

:) Nice. Could not help but laugh.

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you

[Geon Quuin]

I love this. I love you. In a metrosexual way.

[Baby Ricochet]

It's okay bro. I was in the corps. No explanation nessacary

[Frieda P]

HA! I love you so much! ;-)

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you

[Ayvid N]

Hahaha!!!!!
Irresistible read!
And funny too...!

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you

[Carolann Dowsett]

Haha now this I love, some good, hard truth never hurt anyone :)

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you

[Carolann Dowsett]

Welcome.