Gorilla

A poem about bodybuilding. The photo is of me

I'm six foot two
I weigh 2hundred and 65
Thanks to the Marine corps
I can throw off a warrior vibe
I like to stare down chicks
Just to see what their boyfriends will say
No one dares say anything
They just crumble and walk away
I can flat bench 315
I can dead lift 495
Bodybuilding is my b***h
She ll tell you you're still alive
Focus on the iron mistress
She can tame the savage within
Humbled beneath her plating
She can send you back to begin
Crush you, hurt you, kill you
Sacrifice you to God's on high
Just when you think she loves you
She ll break you and make you cry
She waits for you on the floor
She wants to make you scream
She's got the keys to your fantasy
Of a freak show physique dream
Getting the chicks doesn't matter
Girls don't go for freaks
They just lack imagination
They're nothing but girlie geeks
You march to a different drummer
That most don't understand
Steroids diets and dedication
Inspiration from Anne Rand
Many say you're crazy
Muscle pumped beneath your skin
I'm f*****g invincible
I'm a mortal sin

Reviews

[Annabelle Lee]

"Getting the girls doesn't matter
Girls don't go for freaks
They just lack imagination
They're nothing but girlie geeks"

The door swinga both ways, you know. It's not exactly a turn on for a lot of people to see me who's less than five foot and able to lift more than all the girls and a few guys in the weightroom.

Lifters are a whole different species from another planet. And most of the time I'm okay with that.

[Baby Ricochet]

Yes we are. You must have short limbs with a short range of motion so you can lift heavy weights. Smaller framed people's muscle heads don't have anywhere to go but out so they build up lean muscle mass quickly. It's a gift from God. Sometimes his gifts seem a little strange but who are we to question his wisdom? He gave your you the gift of strength like he gave me the gift of the warrior. I'd have prefered money but I don't question his wisdom

[Annabelle Lee]

haha.... or a few more inches... but i guess he knows what he's doing

[Baby Ricochet]

That's for sure

[quinfinn]

it takes a lot of self control and dedication to bodybuild and maintain that physique. i used to lift weights as a young man but never took it to extremes. it seems you have reached that place where you feel powerful and enjoy the whole thing. awesome!

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you

[quinfinn]

welcome!

[Carolann Dowsett]

Haha love, this especially the reference to weight training, yes it can put you to the floor and make you scream but it also makes you feel amazing afterwards. As for being invincible, well every man has a weak spot its just a matter of finding it :p Very enjoyable poem.

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you

[That_Girl]

loool you'd mop the floor with my scrawny a*s. xD Love this! Although, I'm not seeing a picture.... lol

[That_Girl]

Oh, forget that last sentence haha

[Baby Ricochet]

I sorted it out. Thank you for the review