Goddamn poem

It's Another goddamn poem
Written on a goddamn phone
From Ricochet's screwy head
Before he finally goes to bed
There's nothing here to read into
Nothing added nothing new
Just a bunch of s**t that rhymes
While I'm killing precious time
Waiting for my meds to kick
The fancy ones the MD picked
So I could sleep the night away
And not be psycho through the day
They don't cost me anything
The VA pays for everything
Don't you think that's only right
I'd like to get some sleep tonight

Reviews

[Sirius King]

Goddamn Poem...lol
I hope u got sum rest

Good Stuff :-)

[Baby Ricochet]

I did thanks

[Sirius King]

cool man :-)

[M Garcia]

Reminds me when I write of stuff inspired by stupid things like Sierra MIst. Great write.

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you

[That_Girl]

Yes, I think it's right. I would say good night but it's almost 9am so.... moooorning Baby! :D

[Baby Ricochet]

Good morning avy

[Frieda P]

Clever, hope you got some zzzz's! I love it when you can get something from nothing.
Sleep tight Baby.

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you

[AYVID N]

g'nite baby!

[Baby Ricochet]

Good morning DN

[AYVID N]

:)

[KeeD]

psycho ricochet is always fun though :P haha I love your ability to rhyme and add humor to your pieces. This was simple, funny and I enjoyed the read. Send me more read requests, :P Oh wouldn't it be awesome if you could make "The Date" into like a poetic series.. where he encounters a hell of a lot of bad dates with different creatures, humans etc, maybe an amazonian chick or something haha. I just really enjoyed that poem of yours. Much respect, Kee

[Baby Ricochet]

Good idea. Thank you

[quinfinn]

works for me! sometimes the writes not intended for serious considertion are the most fun to write and read!

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you

[quinfinn]

you are welcome, great entertainment!

[Michael G.]

Hope they work for you. Sleep well, friend.

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you Mr G

[KAOlmsted]

Here here. Let's go to bed, Baby. See you in the morning, kid.

[Baby Ricochet]

Good idea. G, night baby

[KAOlmsted]

Sweet dreams.