Goddamn poem

It's Another goddamn poem
Written on a goddamn phone
From Ricochet's screwy head
Before he finally goes to bed
There's nothing here to read into
Nothing added nothing new
Just a bunch of s**t that rhymes
While I'm killing precious time
Waiting for my meds to kick
The fancy ones the MD picked
So I could sleep the night away
And not be psycho through the day
They don't cost me anything
The VA pays for everything
Don't you think that's only right
I'd like to get some sleep tonight

Reviews

[saratogaparty]

Ohhh sleep.

What would life be like without a lack of it?

[jacob erin-cilberto]

and i hope you can get some sleep...this rant is perfect symmetry.

jacob

[Aka.Hipster]

This is such a fantastic poem, A great read .

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you

[just_teague]

This has got to be how great poems start. Loved one line in particular "And not be psycho through the day." I think that even though the syntax is a little weird, it's so funny and realistic that I really don't care! Sometimes when I'm walking around the city, I text myself sweet nothings, so that maybe later they can become something wonderful. I suppose meds would do the trick too.

Do you write any other forms of poetry besides rhyme? Or are rhymes like little word puzzles for you?

[Baby Ricochet]

Once in a while free verse but mostly rhymes. Thank you

[Pax]

well that phone is really useful...
as always your rhyming is great...
sometimes inspirations kicks in when its time to sleep...
Great !

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you Mr pax

[Inda]

Sleep well!

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you

[Marie]

I do't blame you. I'd take anything I could get.

[Baby Ricochet]

Smart woman

[icelandicblue]

This is really fantastic. It's filled with frenetic thoughts and it really drew me in and held me there with the whole straight-jacket process.

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you

[Annabelle Lee]

love it, ricochet!

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you

[Quill~]

I've been there!...can't get the thoughts out. It just keeps turning and turning in the wheel of poetry. I hope you get some sleep tonight. Well done!

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you

[Quill~]

:)