The last day that came to pass

Scratching memories
Put a bullet through my brain
The draped coffin waits

Reviews

[RachelReaper]

Honest and raw

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you

[Marie]

Haiky or senyru--I don't know. good syllable count. Gloomy concept.

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you

[Frieda P]

*sigh* no words Baby.

[Frieda P]

yeah, The kimmer said it better......

[KAOlmsted]

I'm trying to figure out how I should react to this...what I am supposed to say. I could be all philosophical and spout on about how the draped coffin waits for us all, some longer than others...but...that feels...cold. Maybe I should say snap out of it; man up and take your meds and quit your f*****g bitching...but that's not me; not really. I guess, when it comes right down to it, I should just say I don't know what to say, and leave it at that. Because I really don't know what to say. Not here. Not in this stupid box.

[Baby Ricochet]

Not to worry kimmer. Thank you for the review

[KAOlmsted]

Always, Baby...

[sirenribbon@thehptshirt..]

This is cutting. It doesn't need another word to tell us an a awful story. A personal story. Thank You:(( :)

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you

[AYVID N]

Oh! This is chillingly beautiful! But dont do anything of that sort Baby. We need you around at WC!

[Baby Ricochet]

Naaa. I'm not the suicidal type. Thank you for the review

[Adam M. Snow]

Short yet very powerful

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you