The last day that came to pass

Scratching memories
Put a bullet through my brain
The draped coffin waits

Reviews

[dw817]

No coffin for me. Just ashes scattered to the 4-winds.

[Corset]

I'm not getting into that damn thing! Look how tiny and cramped! kiss my a*s Baby, no way, forgeddaboudit!

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you for reading

[That_Girl]

Scratching memories? Sounds like anxiety mixed with longing and depression.

Always love your words... much deeper than most people's.

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[Michael G.]

What Marie said.

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Thank you Mr G

[Tai Ryens]

PTSD triggered by a suicide attempt . . . ? Perhaps a successful suicide, and you watch over what happens afterwards in spirit form? Either way, quite the gloomy concept you've here.

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[Inda]

Nice, raw and the last line seals the deal.

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[Carolann Dowsett]

That's the problem with memories, they sometimes hold us in their grip and just won't let go. The fact that death haunts you from what you have been through and seen is clear. I pray it loosens its hold on you.

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[chandlerl]

Dark and twistingly beautiful

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[Steven]

Three peals of thunder. Very strong, man.

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[Annabelle Lee]

Haunted and beautiful. great

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Thank you