SEALS

His head exploded
Like an over ripe pumpkin
Hit with a sledgehammer
His body crumbled to the street
Like a broken horse pinyada
In a nightmare Christmas parade
He joined the other two
Lying dead in the street that morning
No one would move
dogs wouldn't even come out
To check out the bodies
as they often did
They had the street pinned down
Stone cold mother fuckers
SEALS

Author's Note

Its about a SEAL sniper team we were sent to cover. It was the only time in my life I had ever seen SEALS in the field. They weren't like us. It's really hard to explain.

Reviews

[Frieda P]

Such a gory descriptive write, it made my stomach turn actually. To have to lived these atrocities must be a freaking nightmare. Can't even imagine....thanks for sharing your thoughts and pain with us Baby.

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you for the review

[AYVID N]

I am amazed at the gory happenings out there in the world while most of us take comfort in our cosy homes and warm beds. Thanks for bringing it to attention Baby.

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you for the review

[quinfinn]

a whole nother breed of men.....yeh. this is just brutal, and awesome...and brutal.

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you

[Marie]

I guess not, though I get some idea from this poem.

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you

[Annabelle Lee]

They sond like badasses. Great write

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you

[That_Girl]

I've seen people shot, stabbed, beaten blah blah blah in the streets in CA. But I cannot imagine the caliber of this type of violence. Well done, Baby.

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you

[Steven]

Wow dude. I've said this before, man--another world exist right alongside this one. You should write a chapbook entitled "Tales from a war-torn, parallel dimension" or some s**t. Good on ya

[Baby Ricochet]

That was my original plan

[Steven]

Good plan