Mother Moon Haiku

Gentle mother moon
Drifts in the silver lined sky
The wind breaks the surf

Reviews

[DrD]

Graphic and highly visual. Liked it.

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you

[KAOlmsted]

This is lovely, Baby. That full moon was extraordinary, wasn't it?

[Baby Ricochet]

It was

[Michael G.]

Did you take a ride over to St. Pete? Great write, BR.

[Baby Ricochet]

I used to live in saint Pete. Nice town

[Pax]

reminds me of the shining moon at the beach...
great one!

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you sir

[Seamstress]

Beautiful poem. I do love writings about the moon and night sky.

[Baby Ricochet]

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[RachelReaper]

pretty, reminds me of a full moon.

[Baby Ricochet]

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[Annabelle Lee]

This was great! reminded me of Cali.

[Baby Ricochet]

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[Marie]

Very nice haiku...gentle, serene...

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you

[Frieda P]

Nice calming one.

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you