Afghanistan Senryu

My a*s is freezing
I've not had a dump in days
God I hate this place

Author's Note

Seriously, Afghanistan sucked.

Reviews

[DrD]

Went there once in peaceful times. Funny how war makes a difference.

[Baby Ricochet]

Yes it certainly does

[KeeD]

Haha.. I complaint about taking dumps in any place but my own home..
Kudos' to you man, the life of a solider is so much more than war. I liked this one a lot.

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you

[Jordan's Back]

a Haiku about needing a poo poo

LMAO Sorry It does suck.

[Baby Ricochet]

Yes it does

[KAOlmsted]

Did it suck, Baby? Because you're a little vague here...I'm getting the feeling it sucked, though ;-)

[Baby Ricochet]

Ha!

[Michael G.]

Good write. The great part is you only have to return there only in your mind.

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you Mr G

[Tai Ryens]

Afghan sucked the dump you so graciously held within for days. Hehe, had to be said, Baby R.

[Baby Ricochet]

Ha! Yes it did Tai

[Pax]

i guess i can relate to this feeling..and yes it sucks at times to me too....
nice one my friend.

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you Mr pax

[Seamstress]

I can imagine it did. So glad you made it home safely.

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you

[Marie]

I imagine it did.

[Baby Ricochet]

Trust me on that one

[That_Girl]

And there you have it, folks.

[Baby Ricochet]

That's it