Butterflies

A moment of grace
As blue butterflies flit by
God's flirting with me

Reviews

[Marie]

Very sweet...perfect sylable count...

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you

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Great write :)

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you

[DrD]

You know, you're really refining this art of terse writing with strong message. This is one of my favorites.

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you doc

[Annabelle Lee]

Butterflies were always my favorite when I was little, you said god flirts with you? I liked to think I could use them to flirt back. I believed they'd send my words up to heaven. But then I god older and my preference changed as did my beleifs. I know Butterflies won't talk to god for me just like i know santa and the easter bunny don't exist
*Crosses fingers

[Baby Ricochet]

Your greatest belief is the one you can take comfort in after a personal catastrophe

[Annabelle Lee]

"Your greatest belief is the one you can take comfort in after a personal catastrophe"

Spoken like a true wise man. Thanks, Ricochet!

[Baby Ricochet]

You're welcome Annabelle

[Sirius King]

love that last line :-)

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you

[Ahmad Cox]

Very pretty

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you

[Dr. Wood ?]

love the flirting and the flit...Runs real smoooooth

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you.

[Frieda P]

OMG Baby, you have no idea how much I love this. After I lost my sister, a butterfly fluttered by on the church steps and lingered for a few moments. Lee loved 'flutterby's' with a passion. I adore this.

[Baby Ricochet]

That's beautiful Frieda. Thank you.

[Frieda P]

thank YOU :-)