Spooky's Senryu

A C130 Gunship is a large, heavily armed air craft. We called the one. We worked with "spooky"

Drones buzz overhead

C130 gunship opens deadly live fire

White phosphorus plumes

© 2012 Baby Ricochet

Author's Note

White phosphorus is highly. Flammable. Ordinance. My. Fucking phone is on a goddamn punctuation. Vendetta. Again,

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Falling Leaf.

Buongiorno, This is interesting, very vivid. I like it because it paints a picture of war without getting too graphic; I know that war is graphic but I can't handle it. So, you're a veteran, I take it? Good write Arrivederci! Buongiorno, This is interesting, very vivid. I like it because it paints a picture of war without getting too graphic; I know that war is graphic but I can't handle it. So, you're a veteran, I take it? Good write Arrivederci! Rating /100 Baby Ricochet 11 Years Ago United States Marine Corps. Thank you for the review. I apologize for the Swearing Falling Leaf. 11 Years Ago Swearing, I can handle...really, it's the peeks into the tortured minds of PTSD that I can't handle... Falling Leaf. 11 Years Ago Not that I'm saying that you have it. I hope I didn't just put my foot in my mouth. Baby Ricochet 11 Years Ago Yes I've been diagnosed PTSD. It's okay Savannah. You didn't say anything wrong. I get a little weird this time of year Falling Leaf. 11 Years Ago Okay. Well, it's an honor talking to you. Thank you for serving our country :) Baby Ricochet 11 Years Ago It's nice to talk to you too View 6 more replies Falling Leaf. 11 Years Ago So why did you call this aircraft Spooky? Baby Ricochet 11 Years Ago We had acronyms and nick names for everything Falling Leaf. 11 Years Ago Oh, that's cool

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[Falling Leaf.]

Buongiorno,
This is interesting, very vivid. I like it because it paints a picture of war without getting too graphic; I know that war is graphic but I can't handle it. So, you're a veteran, I take it?

Good write

Arrivederci!

[Baby Ricochet]

United States Marine Corps. Thank you for the review. I apologize for the Swearing

[Falling Leaf.]

Swearing, I can handle...really, it's the peeks into the tortured minds of PTSD that I can't handle...

[Falling Leaf.]

Not that I'm saying that you have it. I hope I didn't just put my foot in my mouth.

[Baby Ricochet]

Yes I've been diagnosed PTSD. It's okay Savannah. You didn't say anything wrong. I get a little weird this time of year

[Falling Leaf.]

Okay. Well, it's an honor talking to you. Thank you for serving our country :)

[Baby Ricochet]

It's nice to talk to you too

[Falling Leaf.]

So why did you call this aircraft Spooky?

[Baby Ricochet]

We had acronyms and nick names for everything

[Falling Leaf.]

Oh, that's cool