Spooky's Senryu

A C130 Gunship is a large, heavily armed air craft. We called the one. We worked with "spooky"

Drones buzz overhead

C130 gunship opens deadly live fire

White phosphorus plumes

© 2012 Baby Ricochet

Author's Note

White phosphorus is highly. Flammable. Ordinance. My. Fucking phone is on a goddamn punctuation. Vendetta. Again,

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The Refined Poet

such a poignant description of air power. It definitely hits the mark for effect. nicely done. such a poignant description of air power. It definitely hits the mark for effect. nicely done. Rating /100 Baby Ricochet 11 Years Ago Thank you Refined Poet

DrD	An all too common scene in today's world and perfectly described in this terse offering. An all too common scene in today's world and perfectly described in this terse offering. Rating /100 Baby Ricochet 11 Years Ago Thank you

KAOlmsted

Damn straight that's spooky. Excellent portrayal of the clear and obvious respect held for such a deadly craft; the enemy must have been shaking in their thobe robes ;-) Damn straight that's spooky. Excellent portrayal of the clear and obvious respect held for such a deadly craft; the enemy must have been shaking in their thobe robes ;-) Rating /100 Baby Ricochet 11 Years Ago Air power was brutal

Annabelle Lee

is it wrong for me to feel just... empty when i read these? is it wrong for me to feel just... empty when i read these? Rating /100 Baby Ricochet 11 Years Ago You feel however you feel. It's not a wrong or right thing

nigrum homonculus

so when spooky came s**t got real? i remember you telling me about white phosphorus and how it made the enemy piss themselves. good senryu though. i see you've been writing alot. so when spooky came shit got real? i remember you telling me about white phosphorus and how it made the enemy piss themselves. good senryu though. i see you've been writing alot. Rating /100 Baby Ricochet 11 Years Ago My computer crashed so I'm posting on my phone. That's why I'm working short. I've found I can express beauty and romance in Senryus and Haikus though this obviously isn't one of those

Inda	Some seriously scary s**t indeed. Good one! Some seriously scary shit indeed. Good one! Rating /100 Baby Ricochet 11 Years Ago Thank you

James William Dyer

Hell yeah white phosphorous is flammable. And the red P is chokes people to death in gas form :) Nice haiku. I worry about the drones being used to police the civilian population. Hell yeah white phosphorous is flammable. And the red P is chokes people to death in gas form :) Nice haiku. I worry about the drones being used to police the civilian population. Rating /100 Baby Ricochet 11 Years Ago That is something to worry about.

Kaylor Mason

Smartphones can be vicious instruments Smartphones can be vicious instruments Rating /100 Baby Ricochet 11 Years Ago That's for sure

Clayton Bardwell

The authors note cracked me up. The authors note cracked me up. Rating /100 Baby Ricochet 11 Years Ago My phone has autism

Marie

Must have been something to see, let alone experience. Must have been something to see, let alone experience. Rating /100 Baby Ricochet 11 Years Ago We called her spooky for a reason. Thank you for the review

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[The Refined Poet]

such a poignant description of air power. It definitely hits the mark for effect. nicely done.

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you Refined Poet

[DrD]

An all too common scene in today's world and perfectly described in this terse offering.

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you

[KAOlmsted]

Damn straight that's spooky. Excellent portrayal of the clear and obvious respect held for such a deadly craft; the enemy must have been shaking in their thobe robes ;-)

[Baby Ricochet]

Air power was brutal

[Annabelle Lee]

is it wrong for me to feel just... empty when i read these?

[Baby Ricochet]

You feel however you feel. It's not a wrong or right thing

[nigrum homonculus]

so when spooky came s**t got real? i remember you telling me about white phosphorus and how it made the enemy piss themselves. good senryu though. i see you've been writing alot.

[Baby Ricochet]

My computer crashed so I'm posting on my phone. That's why I'm working short. I've found I can express beauty and romance in Senryus and Haikus though this obviously isn't one of those

[Inda]

Some seriously scary s**t indeed. Good one!

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you

[James William Dyer]

Hell yeah white phosphorous is flammable. And the red P is chokes people to death in gas form :) Nice haiku. I worry about the drones being used to police the civilian population.

[Baby Ricochet]

That is something to worry about.

[Kaylor Mason]

Smartphones can be vicious instruments

[Baby Ricochet]

That's for sure

[Clayton Bardwell]

The authors note cracked me up.

[Baby Ricochet]

My phone has autism

[Marie]

Must have been something to see, let alone experience.

[Baby Ricochet]

We called her spooky for a reason. Thank you for the review