Zodiac Twilight Senryu
A Poem by
Baby Ricochet
Wake me for the stars
Zodiac twilight midnight
My love in the sky
© 2012 Baby Ricochet
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Quite nice. You've finally learned.
Posted 12 Years Ago
You're like a haiku machine! Well done Baby....
and have a great holiday!
Posted 12 Years Ago
You're like a haiku machine! Well done Baby....
and have a great holiday!
12 Years Ago
Thank you. After I finished bastardizing the haiku now I know how they work. Simple elegance
Another fantastic haiku. Astronomy is one of my favorite subjects, could never make a living off of it though
Posted 12 Years Ago
Another fantastic haiku. Astronomy is one of my favorite subjects, could never make a living off of it though
12 Years Ago
No trouble at all
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Added on December 24, 2012
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Baby Ricochet Tampa, FL
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