Zodiac Twilight Senryu
A Poem by
Baby Ricochet
Wake me for the stars
Zodiac twilight midnight
My love in the sky
© 2012 Baby Ricochet
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Sages once read messages in the stars in a science long forgotten. Who knows what they learned and how much truth of it remains? I liked this very much.
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
That's for sure.
Somewhere out there. :)
Posted 11 Years Ago
Somewhere out there. :)
The stars always bring loved ones together no matter how far apart they are.
Posted 11 Years Ago
The stars always bring loved ones together no matter how far apart they are.
so pretty!
Posted 11 Years Ago
so pretty!
Hint of loneliness, really enjoyed it.
Posted 11 Years Ago
Hint of loneliness, really enjoyed it.
Very starry
Posted 11 Years Ago
Very starry
Beautiful! :)
Posted 11 Years Ago
Beautiful! :)
Err, a graveyard job that calls to you every night from eight to six? I like it, especially the clouded sarcasm you hint here and there.
Posted 11 Years Ago
Err, a graveyard job that calls to you every night from eight to six? I like it, especially the clouded sarcasm you hint here and there.
nicely done
Posted 11 Years Ago
nicely done
Beautiful.
Posted 11 Years Ago
Beautiful.
11 Years Ago
I was talking about me...did you write something?
;-)
11 Years Ago
Ha! That was good baby
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Added on December 24, 2012
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Baby Ricochet Tampa, FL
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