Dwarf star Haiku

Dwarf star Haiku

A Poem by Baby Ricochet

Dwarf star light tonight
shines on the crescent white waves
Egrets skim the surf

© 2012 Baby Ricochet


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Simply amazing.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

11 Years Ago

Thank you
Finally a perfect syllable count.Congratulations.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

11 Years Ago

Thank you
This one is truly elegant, endless talent my friend. Bravo.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

11 Years Ago

Thank you
You're very good at haiku! (I'm...horrible...) Paints a very whole, very beautiful picture of the star shining on the waves. Exquisitely written!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

11 Years Ago

Thank you
Falling Leaf.

11 Years Ago

No trouble at all

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 Added on December 24, 2012
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Baby Ricochet
Baby Ricochet

Tampa, FL



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