Dwarf star Haiku

Dwarf star light tonight

shines on the crescent white waves

Egrets skim the surf

Reviews

[DrD]

Makes me want to be there. Very nice, BR

[Baby Ricochet]

thanks doc

[That_Girl]

I love birrrrrrrds. :) Nice.

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you

[Seamstress]

So nice.

[Baby Ricochet]

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[Epipsychologist]

That sounds nice.

[Baby Ricochet]

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[RachelReaper]

pretty!

[Baby Ricochet]

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[Kaylor Mason]

Not many things are as gorgeous as that light dancing along the waves

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you

[AYVID N]

Wow! Like it! :)

[Baby Ricochet]

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[Tai Ryens]

Lovely seen crafted here; oh I can already imagine the egrets soaring in the skies!

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you

[Annabelle Lee]

i can see it all. br. another good one

[Baby Ricochet]

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[Clayton Bardwell]

Now that's a Haiku! A moment in time, captured. A vivid image of a natural scene. If you keep this up you'll ruin you rep:)

[Baby Ricochet]

I thought it already was ruined

[Clayton Bardwell]

It would ruin the ruined part. Now I'm getting confused.

[Baby Ricochet]

I changed the name of Zodiac twilight to senryu. It's not a moment in nature scene. If I'm gonna write these things I should at least know the difference.

[Clayton Bardwell]

Now I'm really confused.