Fire fight Haiku

Saw is an acronym for squad automatic weapon., the. M249. Light. Machine gun.

AK rounds whistle past

My head feels like an egg shell

SAW rips open air

Author's Note

A SAW makes a loud, angry rattling sound. when. fired. For some goddamn reason my phone. has suddenly decided. Throw. Periods all over the fucking place. Goddamn smartphone.

Reviews

[KAOlmsted]

Your phone is having its monthly ;-)

Chilling, this. Really sobering after all of the funny stuff I've read this morning...this is why I respect you so much as a writer--you have the ability to do both...make me laugh, and make me think. Good on ya.

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you

[That_Girl]

Haha if you have an iphone, it's because you're pressing the spacebar twice. Otherwise, I haven't a clue. :p

Love the egg shell bit. Nice!

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you.