Cyber Crush Haiku

Sweet distant voices

Long to stroke giant tendons

Horses strut the path

Author's Note

Does this one need a translation?

Reviews

[Ama May Cooper]

Im getting a sense of sexual tension, perhaps a dream of someone something . It reads very elegantly and im definantly getting saucy, perhaps the stroking of a giant tendon isnt as innocent as it seems

[Baby Ricochet]

Cool. Thank you

[SamanthaMarie]

My mind is a trash can. I'm sorry. I took it to a whole other level.

[Baby Ricochet]

You're not that far off.

[Seamstress]

Amen!

[Baby Ricochet]

Ha!

[quinfinn]

naaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay! yeh, i get it....well done, poet!

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you

[Frieda P]

Sounds like you have a stiffy for your online crush.

[Baby Ricochet]

Maybe.

[Frieda P]

Was I warm? ;-)

[Baby Ricochet]

I think so

[Frieda P]

haha didn't you write it? :P

[Marie]

Probably, but never mind.

[Baby Ricochet]

Okay

[KAOlmsted]

Perfect. I sincerely have no f*****g clue what this is about, but I absolutely love it. I get the first two lines...I think...but that last one...are you saying you're hung like a...oh well...never mind ;-) Good good good stuff, Baby.

[Baby Ricochet]

The third line is a reference to masculine sexuality

[KAOlmsted]

Tease :-p

[Ruth]

Damn awesome...getting stronger and stronger!

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you

[Tai Ryens]

I'll admit it was hard, though your title foreshadowed clues to the concept. Lust through a site like, say, Omegle?

[Baby Ricochet]

This one's cryptic for sure. The original title was just crush which made it impossible

[Tai Ryens]

You should have kept that title. It paves the paths to, say, infinite other interpretations due to metaphors.

[Baby Ricochet]

Yeah, probably. I should do one so obscure i don't even know what it's about.

[Tai Ryens]

Let your readers baffle and argue of what it is; and don't give hints.

[Baby Ricochet]

Good idea. Next Haiku, weirdest one yet.

[DrD]

I’m reading a book
About anti-gravity.
Just can’t put it down

D****t, I want Haiku to be easy to understand! Whadya think I am, a thinker or something?

[Baby Ricochet]

I'll admit this one's tricky