Bats

Bats

A Poem by Baby Ricochet

I pulled her pants off
Bats flew out her haunted chooch
The Moon drifted

© 2012 Baby Ricochet


My Review

Would you like to review this Poem?
Login | Register




Reviews

You were SO CLOSE! I was counting and smiling and thinking YAY and then...ah well...this is still classic Baby R, any way you count it. Haunted chooch, f*****g priceless...(we call it a kooch in my house, chooch reminds me of a train...unless that's what you were going for??? *laugh*) Bats. Love it.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

11 Years Ago

I got the word chooch from Jade..
Lay off the energy drinks for a while, will ya? lol

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Baby Ricochet

11 Years Ago

Will do
...creepy. Is that what you spend your time thinking about? lol chicks with bat infested vags?? Hilarious. Love it. XD

Posted 11 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

11 Years Ago

Yes
Clayton Bardwell

11 Years Ago

Funny~!

3
next Next Page
last Last Page
Share This
Email
Facebook
Twitter
Request Read Request
Add to Library My Library
Subscribe Subscribe


Stats

625 Views
23 Reviews
Rating
Added on December 19, 2012
Last Updated on December 19, 2012

Author

Baby Ricochet
Baby Ricochet

Tampa, FL



About
I write just for the hell of it A way to spend some time Blurting out in cyber space Whatever's on my mind Maybe funny maybe tragic Emotional and raw Politi.. more..

Writing

Related Writing

People who liked this story also liked..