Nothing

Words about nothing

Written by no one

No one will read

 

Photos of nothing

Taken by no one

No one will see

 

Music for nothing

Composed by no one

No one will hear

 

Roads that go nowhere 

Through valleys of nothing

driven by no one

 

No darkness

No light

No joy

No sorrow

No pity

No laughter

No heartache

No memories

 

Just nothing

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[Annabelle Lee]

this poem depressed me. in a good way, I think. Just payin attention to the nothing nothing nothings when there is so much around us to be greatful for. Im not gong to preach to you because I know you arent like that. But would you min if I inquire as.to where this poem came from?

[Aka.Hipster]

This probably one of my favorite poems I love the ending lines especially.."no laughter no heartache"

A very beautiful poem .

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you

[Jo March]

Lovely. Very nice.

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you

[The Refined Poet]

this is nicely crafted. I can almost hear this being read aloud for effect.

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you

[Shimmerbliss/CAF]

Wow! I have been away awhile and haven't read your new posts. This is unique and stirs my mind and heart with "nothing"...as if floating...examining what meaning really is...reminds me of a dark place I once knew. Great job.

[Baby Ricochet]

thank you for reviewing Nothing Shimmerbliss and it's great to have you back on the WC

[Shimmerbliss/CAF]

I have missed so much! Glad to be able to catch up with your work!

[Eric Cox]

Cool depth to this poem.

[Baby Ricochet]

thank you for reviewing Nothing Eric

[Eric Cox]

you're welcome

[Kaylor Mason]

The desolation of this piece leaves the reader feeling hollow. Void. Nice effect

[Baby Ricochet]

thank you for reviewing nothein Kailer

[James William Dyer]

nice. It telescopes the reader out and away to see it all that way, like a little pinprick star, all the big events, all the creativity,m the arguments, the personal lives, the words, the hangman's noose, the sirens, the artists, the soldiers, the lovers......all Nothing, in their own rite.

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you for reviewing nothing James

[kublakhan27]

Such an intriguing, enigmatic piece...I guess it goes to show that even an anti-art statement is a work of art in its own way...it reminds me too of Nowhere Man (Beatles) but while that song is about one distinct person, and has a more optimistic feel, this examines life/existence as a whole, where there is no such optimism to be found...this is an incredible piece.

[Baby Ricochet]

THank you for reviewing nothing kublakhan27

[kublakhan27]

No problem^^

[Marie]

No review about words that say nothing, music that plays nothing, art that shows nothing.
Nothing.

[Baby Ricochet]

thanks for nothing