Nothing

Words about nothing

Written by no one

No one will read

 

Photos of nothing

Taken by no one

No one will see

 

Music for nothing

Composed by no one

No one will hear

 

Roads that go nowhere 

Through valleys of nothing

driven by no one

 

No darkness

No light

No joy

No sorrow

No pity

No laughter

No heartache

No memories

 

Just nothing

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[lee von cleef]

now float zen such a hard place to remain

[Baby Ricochet]

thank you

[sirenribbon@thehptshirt..]

This made me think about all the genius that goes without witness. It is baron all the while filling the page with haste and drama. The starkness is colorless at the end, that's impressive. The flow is almost lovely...

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you

[Horizon K.]

Wow, that made me feel very empty. But in the vast scheme of things, the hugeness and timelessness of the universe, how insignificant we are. Lovely & thought provoking...

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you

[Corset]

when it all blows away there will be nothing, and all our words and thoughts, and hope and dreams, words and poems will just disappear and burn up into a space ball puff of smoke and debris. Now i'm depressed.

[Baby Ricochet]

The buddists speak of impermanence in a positive light,

[Inda]

Nothing still makes us feel every word. Great poem.

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you for the review

[fireblossom]

Something about nothing. A feeling, a state of being. A bare white room brightly lit. Nowhere to hide and still the truth is elusive. Some of my tortured nights were spent wide awake. That light drained all meaning. I think you have been that too.

A well written poem. Either brave or desperate. It doesn't matter. It works very well.

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you for the review.

[Ruth]

Nothing...not an easy word to describe but you have rendered that "nothing" full of life :)

[nigrum homonculus]

feels like some stuff i've been going through lately at work. feeling like a robot or something. good write bro. i miss reading your work.

[Baby Ricochet]

I miss reading yours too bro. You need to post some new stuff. I know it's killing you not to.

[AYVID N]

Where ther's life, there will be Something. I can relate this nothingness to death...eerie images of silence haunt me.
Thought provoking! :)

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you for reviewing nothing

[Frieda P]

Being devoid of any and all emotions is probably the saddest of all, this piece was moving. Simple yet effective in it's delivery.

[Baby Ricochet]

thank you for the review frieda