Writers blocking

Writers blocking

A Poem by Baby Ricochet
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Baby Ricochet has been pissed a few people off on Writerscafe. Really? No!

"

    Ricochet's blocked by writers

         Two I know about

    One I know his reasons why

        The other I do not

 

One writer wrote a spiteful poem

   cursing the uniform I wore

Said it brought joy to his heart

When Marines were killed in war

 

Artistic expression is a good thing

    That much I do agree

 Smear the uniform of the corps

 You're gonna hear from me

 

I wasn't looking to start a flame war

That wasn't my strict intention

There were just a couple of things

I felt compelled to mention

 

The Marine corps follow orders

With American interests at stake

We went where the president sent us

There was no such thing as debate

 

Army Air Force Navy Marines

No we don't ask reasons why

We did what was expected of us

That was my review reply

 

      So I posted my opinions

No swearing threats or name calling

The poem was deleted I was blocked

He must have found me galling

 

I must have struck a writers nerve

      S**t happens in this biz

The other dude that's blocking me

I don't know what his problem is

 

Maybe he doesn't like my sewer mouth

and perfurs words dripping with honey

Maybe he doesn't like Jarhead marines

Maybe he doesn't think I'm funny

 

     Either way it's all okay

I can lived with being blocked

 WritersCafe is not for those

who get their panties in a knot

 

 

 

 

© 2012 Baby Ricochet


Author's Note

Baby Ricochet
The guy that was writing trash about US armed forces was an Amrerican. I'll let some of that crap slide from Europeans but Americans? Talk shit about the war and it's architects all you want. But when you start in on the men and women who did the fighting, bleeding, crying and dying cause we were ordered to? No. Bad, very, very bad.
It's that stupid civilian line of " soldiers should ask why" What in the hell kind of army debates orders? You figure that shit out the first two minutes you're 18 year old ass is in boot camp. The other guy who's blocking me I've no clue who he is. I don't recall ever reading his work but he's obviously read mine. I stumbled on him by accident during a conversation between That_girl and Philgod. His posts were kind of snarky so I clicked on him and what do you know, I'm blocked. So I chimed into the conversation and he promptly deleted all his posts. Marines can make a retreat happen even in cyber space. HOORAH!

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Ha! Don't worry about people blocking you--I've been blocked by more people than I care to mention on here, and I don't have a clue as to why--nor do I really care. My view is anyone that blocks me must have a problem with my work (or me personally) and as such, it's their problem--let them deal with it. If I've slandered anyone or offended anyone on here, unintentionally, then I'm sorry. I wish someone would tell me why they block me before they do it--that would be nice.
For the most part, when people block me on here, I just forget about them. They obviously have issues.
Except for one. Tate Morgan blocked me--I have no idea why. I really admire his work, and before he blocked me I really enjoyed reading it: he's an EXCELLENT writer; but I must've said or did something wrong (wish I knew what it was) and he just blocked me . . . ah well. C'est la vie.

This guy who was bad mouthing you--he comes from the free, individualistic world of the calm, rationally minded civilian . . . the kind of human being who is not required to kill in order to survive. It's not so much that these civvies hate soldiers as it is that they--very literally--cannot comprehend the world soldiers live in. All they really know is the sheltered peace you guys fight and die to preserve every day, whilst they live on, blissfully ignorant. They can't comprehend hardly anything outside their civvie lives, for that matter; and if they do, they prefer not to dwell on it. To the true liberal civilian, soldiers will always be an enigma . . . they just don't get it.

That doesn't justify this man's slander by any measure, though. Here's a thought: Put him in the desert and surround him with insurgents, men who would gladly tear him to pieces just for being American and over there, and then give him a rifle and say: Survive.
He'll sing a different tune after that, guaranteed.

Posted 12 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Baby Ricochet

12 Years Ago

First poem of his I read I thought "Jesus Christ what in the hell is wrong with this kid." No way co.. read more
That_Girl

12 Years Ago

I want to read! Send me a link to his profile???
Baby Ricochet

12 Years Ago

K



Reviews

I just wanted to say one thing; "Baby Ricochet is GOOD".


E.L.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

12 Years Ago

Thank you so much for reading E.L.

12 Years Ago

Always a pleasure Babe
I'm with you, f**k with my people, you go down!

I was blocked by a lady, don't know why. Never "talked" to her. I've been blocked several times after that for good reason I presume. I am an a*s.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

12 Years Ago

We all love you man. Thanks for reading
Clayton Bardwell

12 Years Ago

Good poem, thanks for including the Air Force.
Baby Ricochet

12 Years Ago

We're all bros man
Talking trash about the forces. An american at worst. That's f*king bull s*t! I bet he didn't even have good reasons. Nice poem man

Posted 12 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

12 Years Ago

Thank you so much for reading
His freedom of speech (and yours and mine): The exact thing you and all the rest fought for. F**k 'em. It's a good poem...but f**k 'em. -kimmer

Posted 12 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

12 Years Ago

Thankyou so much for reading kimmer
Hoorah Baby R! I've been blocked by a few myself, usually spurned from sticking up for other people. Drama aside well said Man.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

12 Years Ago

for sure. Thanks for reading
I have two people that I know about as well. Same situation! One I know why and the other I don't. Odd.

He sounds like a raging jackass and I really hope he's not on my friends list. Killer poem though Baby R. Nicely done!

And SD from last night was a pompous prick.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

That_Girl

12 Years Ago

She rejected my friend request lol. I don't read any of her stuff. :p
Marie

12 Years Ago

I know I'm sarcastic and flippant and don't take too much seriously and probably offend people. But .. read more
Baby Ricochet

12 Years Ago

HA! Yes you are Marie, Yes you are.
"Semper Fi"

Posted 12 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

12 Years Ago

HOORAH!
Who blocked u? Let me guess The Rock And Roll cowboy? Im just guessing lol

Posted 12 Years Ago


Steven Cash

12 Years Ago

I never blocked Baby

I actually would love to make friends with him

I am w.. read more
That_Girl

12 Years Ago

I haven't a clue.
Crazy Cat Man

12 Years Ago

I blocked myself :P

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