Writers blocking

Writers blocking

A Poem by Baby Ricochet
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Baby Ricochet has been pissed a few people off on Writerscafe. Really? No!

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    Ricochet's blocked by writers

         Two I know about

    One I know his reasons why

        The other I do not

 

One writer wrote a spiteful poem

   cursing the uniform I wore

Said it brought joy to his heart

When Marines were killed in war

 

Artistic expression is a good thing

    That much I do agree

 Smear the uniform of the corps

 You're gonna hear from me

 

I wasn't looking to start a flame war

That wasn't my strict intention

There were just a couple of things

I felt compelled to mention

 

The Marine corps follow orders

With American interests at stake

We went where the president sent us

There was no such thing as debate

 

Army Air Force Navy Marines

No we don't ask reasons why

We did what was expected of us

That was my review reply

 

      So I posted my opinions

No swearing threats or name calling

The poem was deleted I was blocked

He must have found me galling

 

I must have struck a writers nerve

      S**t happens in this biz

The other dude that's blocking me

I don't know what his problem is

 

Maybe he doesn't like my sewer mouth

and perfurs words dripping with honey

Maybe he doesn't like Jarhead marines

Maybe he doesn't think I'm funny

 

     Either way it's all okay

I can lived with being blocked

 WritersCafe is not for those

who get their panties in a knot

 

 

 

 

© 2012 Baby Ricochet


Author's Note

Baby Ricochet
The guy that was writing trash about US armed forces was an Amrerican. I'll let some of that crap slide from Europeans but Americans? Talk shit about the war and it's architects all you want. But when you start in on the men and women who did the fighting, bleeding, crying and dying cause we were ordered to? No. Bad, very, very bad.
It's that stupid civilian line of " soldiers should ask why" What in the hell kind of army debates orders? You figure that shit out the first two minutes you're 18 year old ass is in boot camp. The other guy who's blocking me I've no clue who he is. I don't recall ever reading his work but he's obviously read mine. I stumbled on him by accident during a conversation between That_girl and Philgod. His posts were kind of snarky so I clicked on him and what do you know, I'm blocked. So I chimed into the conversation and he promptly deleted all his posts. Marines can make a retreat happen even in cyber space. HOORAH!

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Ha! Don't worry about people blocking you--I've been blocked by more people than I care to mention on here, and I don't have a clue as to why--nor do I really care. My view is anyone that blocks me must have a problem with my work (or me personally) and as such, it's their problem--let them deal with it. If I've slandered anyone or offended anyone on here, unintentionally, then I'm sorry. I wish someone would tell me why they block me before they do it--that would be nice.
For the most part, when people block me on here, I just forget about them. They obviously have issues.
Except for one. Tate Morgan blocked me--I have no idea why. I really admire his work, and before he blocked me I really enjoyed reading it: he's an EXCELLENT writer; but I must've said or did something wrong (wish I knew what it was) and he just blocked me . . . ah well. C'est la vie.

This guy who was bad mouthing you--he comes from the free, individualistic world of the calm, rationally minded civilian . . . the kind of human being who is not required to kill in order to survive. It's not so much that these civvies hate soldiers as it is that they--very literally--cannot comprehend the world soldiers live in. All they really know is the sheltered peace you guys fight and die to preserve every day, whilst they live on, blissfully ignorant. They can't comprehend hardly anything outside their civvie lives, for that matter; and if they do, they prefer not to dwell on it. To the true liberal civilian, soldiers will always be an enigma . . . they just don't get it.

That doesn't justify this man's slander by any measure, though. Here's a thought: Put him in the desert and surround him with insurgents, men who would gladly tear him to pieces just for being American and over there, and then give him a rifle and say: Survive.
He'll sing a different tune after that, guaranteed.

Posted 12 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Baby Ricochet

12 Years Ago

First poem of his I read I thought "Jesus Christ what in the hell is wrong with this kid." No way co.. read more
That_Girl

12 Years Ago

I want to read! Send me a link to his profile???
Baby Ricochet

12 Years Ago

K



Reviews

Welcome to the club of "been blocked." I had a gentleman block me after he went off on one of my poem about patriotism. (Sound familiar?) He later apologized for his words; but, then blocked me from reading his work. Not that I really want to read his.
You wrote this well. I don't know the "why" or the "what" started this. Sounds like you got a taste of what a lot of Vietnam Vets ran into, back in the day. It hurts and the ego gets a strong jolt. But then, we would still do what we did, again... and our reasons would be the same.
In case you are curious, "A Face to Believe."

Posted 12 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

12 Years Ago

The way the Nam vets got treated was dispicable. That was a bad clash of competing cultural revoluti.. read more
Ha! Don't worry about people blocking you--I've been blocked by more people than I care to mention on here, and I don't have a clue as to why--nor do I really care. My view is anyone that blocks me must have a problem with my work (or me personally) and as such, it's their problem--let them deal with it. If I've slandered anyone or offended anyone on here, unintentionally, then I'm sorry. I wish someone would tell me why they block me before they do it--that would be nice.
For the most part, when people block me on here, I just forget about them. They obviously have issues.
Except for one. Tate Morgan blocked me--I have no idea why. I really admire his work, and before he blocked me I really enjoyed reading it: he's an EXCELLENT writer; but I must've said or did something wrong (wish I knew what it was) and he just blocked me . . . ah well. C'est la vie.

This guy who was bad mouthing you--he comes from the free, individualistic world of the calm, rationally minded civilian . . . the kind of human being who is not required to kill in order to survive. It's not so much that these civvies hate soldiers as it is that they--very literally--cannot comprehend the world soldiers live in. All they really know is the sheltered peace you guys fight and die to preserve every day, whilst they live on, blissfully ignorant. They can't comprehend hardly anything outside their civvie lives, for that matter; and if they do, they prefer not to dwell on it. To the true liberal civilian, soldiers will always be an enigma . . . they just don't get it.

That doesn't justify this man's slander by any measure, though. Here's a thought: Put him in the desert and surround him with insurgents, men who would gladly tear him to pieces just for being American and over there, and then give him a rifle and say: Survive.
He'll sing a different tune after that, guaranteed.

Posted 12 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Baby Ricochet

12 Years Ago

First poem of his I read I thought "Jesus Christ what in the hell is wrong with this kid." No way co.. read more
That_Girl

12 Years Ago

I want to read! Send me a link to his profile???
Baby Ricochet

12 Years Ago

K
dang...dude now that's why we have a Marine Corp....cause they kick a*s when needed...hell nobody likes war it just so happens its all over the place...somebody has to fight it...poets just write what they understand...Americans stand up to what we are assigned to accomplish...no questions asked...

Posted 12 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

12 Years Ago

Thank you for reading my work Art Sun. I've read several of yours and they are gorgeous. A couple of.. read more
I tend to not wear panties when on WritersCafe, its easier that way :) and I hate knots.

Freedom of speech is a good thing, its what the people in our military fight for. When you put something out on the internet you have to be prepared for people to have an opinion about it. Clever write and expression of your opinions dear Ricochet. I enjoy your poems, and I love love love your love of the Military and our country.

Posted 12 Years Ago


That_Guy

12 Years Ago

I knew it!
Baby Ricochet

12 Years Ago

THank you so much for reading my work heather
What an ignorant thing for that guy to say! Both of my grandpas died in the war and I never got to see them, my uncle used to be in the marines... who is this guy?! If you won't give him "potty mouth" I certainly will! If I knew who that was, I'd verbally pummel him into the ground

Posted 12 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

12 Years Ago

He had a few other negative reviews before mine. I think mine was the icing on the cake that prompte.. read more
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Mic
Ric, say it ain't so! lol.

Honestly, can't understand the whole blocking thing. Sounds odd.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

12 Years Ago

I've never blocked anyone and doubt I ever will. You don't like something don't read it.
Baby Ricochet

12 Years Ago

Thank you for reading my work mic
lol... very nice

Posted 12 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

12 Years Ago

thanx
Yeah I think I know the one clown. I have had run-ins with him (if it's who I think). No loss there:)

ANyway, nice poem to put them on notice...lol

Posted 12 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

12 Years Ago

Thanks for reading and welcome back to writerscafe
The Analog Kid

12 Years Ago

YW...and thanks...just needed a break for a few weeks...
I can't imagine why anyone would block you. Your delicate language, subtle wit, exquisite phrasing all combine to create the perfect classical poems we love.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Baby Ricochet

12 Years Ago

LMAO!!!!!!!!!! Marie I love you...
Marie

12 Years Ago

You understand me perfectly.
I've been blocked more than once, but I've never blocked anyone a.. read more
Baby Ricochet

12 Years Ago

I've never blocked anyone either. I did unfriend crown court cencored poet for one day when we got i.. read more

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