I can't spell Haiku

I think this is a Haiku

I ate a KFC biscuit

With eighteen pads of butter

I love eating danger

Author's Note

I know it's silly. I'm trying to write Haiku's and I'm not sure I know how

Reviews

[Brandon S. Whitten]

May not be a haiku, but is a good poem.

[Baby Ricochet]

thanx

[Legolas]

Haha, funny poem. That stuff is filled with fat. Yeah, the syllables go 5-7-5. You've got like 8-7-6. Good attempt though.

[Baby Ricochet]

Thanx. Haiku's aren't my thing. That's why I titled it I can't spell Haiku, cause I can't. Someone posted it wasn't a Haiku but a senryu. I guess so.

[Legolas]

Still, it was a good poem.

[Baby Ricochet]

I thought it was funny

[Antonio Valentino]

only 18 pads.. hey whats not to love about buttery biscuits :)

funny and cute

:)

[Baby Ricochet]

thanx

[Ama May Cooper]

I think it misses the powerful mystery about a hiaku, the meaning is to plain to see but that is just my opinon.
Funny all the same, rather comical and well thought out.

[Baby Ricochet]

That's why it's called "I can't spell Haiku."

[cynthiabuhainbaello]

Delightful Haiku (actually it is a Senryu). Nice and easy with a lot of humor in it. I like it very much :-))

[Baby Ricochet]

thanx

[Audrey Howitt]

Loved this!

[Samuel Dickens]

Aw, hell, I think this is a great haiku! Better than most--it made me snicker.

[Pax]

you eat those..to creamy for me..lol..
keep trying..now you know the rules you can make your own..

[Shimmerbliss/CAF]

I know very little about Haiku, but I know that this is great whatever it is. :)

[Baby Ricochet]

thanx

[eglantine]

Did ya know that a traditional haiku can be read both forwards and backwards? (line 1-3 and then line 3-1). lines should have 5-7-5 syllabells, but modern haikus are much more lenient.

[Baby Ricochet]

Thanx. I'm flattered someone with your cred read something I wrote