Freeze

Not quite sure what this is, I just posted it because I haven't in a while.

The freeze is cold

and quick

Running up and down my spine as I grab for my sweater

Fingers

so cold they can't move

Desperate

to reach

Shrinking

Shriveling

Straightening the whole world until it echoes in endless agony 

Author's Note

Please tell me what you think, I haven't put up writing in forever and I am craving feedback. It's much appreciated and thank you for all your time.

Reviews

[Ezekiel Silver]

An intriguing poem with excellent word choice. The imagery is hard to grasp though, if it were longer that would help. I'd recommend doing so on your next poem. Other than that, I see nothing wrong with it whatsoever.

[Sami Khalil]

Endless agony is not good . This poem is...:)................

[Phillitup]

Thank you :)

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)...........