Tingle

Tingle
That turns into a sting
Into a sear
Into a tear
A slice
A slit
Hurt
Pain
Waxing
Waning
Crying
Screaming
Running
Writing
Pounding
Throbbing
Stopping
Starting
Ceasing
Decreasing
All from a tingle

Author's Note

Tell me what you think, I want reviews please!

Reviews

[WriterMe]

Oh my... god.
That was perfect, exactly how how I feel right about now. But the most amazing fact of it all was that how well it puzzled in, even though they were merely words. Just one word, one after the other. Astounding.
You cannot be 13. I refuse to believe it. Nope.

[Phillitup]

thank you! I deeply appreciate the kind words! Yes, I am 13

[writingurl14]

wow the way that you started with a word and ended with that word is cool! I really enjoyed reading your work...

[Phillitup]

Thanks :)

[Ethereal Eclipse]

woah, thats intense! loving this!! all from a tingle...sounds so familiar, its lovely:)

[Phillitup]

thank you!

[blegh]

i love it!
very beautiful

[Isabelle Howard]

I love this! So pretty.

[Phillitup]

thanks

[Isabelle Howard]

Welcome!

[Tasha]

This was amazing Dell. Your work is always amazing, but this was special in a beautiful way. Yes I agree its so hard to believe you're 13. Keep it up!!!
~Tasha

[Phillitup]

thanks

[Tasha]

anytime

[Savior of Time]

I think know the meaning, and this completely explains it. Amazing, Dell; amazing.

[Phillitup]

thanks

[Savior of Time]

Ner problemer! :)