Illusion

There,
Gone.

Author's Note

I thought of this on a five hour car ride when I was writing poetry instead of working on homework. Oops. Anyway, I hope you like my simplistic idea!

Reviews

[floralhorror]

a lot of people think art should be extravagant and lasting. But that's not true. The most amazing pieces, I think, are something small, and transient. A fleeting glance. This, i believe, is true art. It's beautiful in it's simplicity.
Wonderful, amazing and lovely

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

Floral i am sorry for any misunderstanding.
Bye

[Phillitup]

thanks

[Savior of Time]

This is amazing. That's all I can say. Nice job Philby:)

[Phillitup]

thanks

[Evie]

This is really beautiful. It's amazing how two words can be so deep and have so much meaning. When you put it like this, it makes you think. Well done :)

[Phillitup]

Thanks!

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

So true!

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

Life............:)

[scripted]

wow!!! what are you doing with your life cause this was so not worth reading... haha;P just kidding, this pieced explain an illusion very well... nice job, yours truely Danielle

[Phillitup]

I was worried for a second! haha! I'm glad you liked it! Thanks!

[Lucien Maier]

hahah well done.

[Phillitup]

:)

Thank you!

[MandaBear]

Very interesting! So simple and yet so perfect. Great job 100%

[Phillitup]

Thanks!

[Tasha]

Two words but tied together perfectly. Simplistic but beautiful, I loved it! Keep it up Dell.
~Tasha

[Phillitup]

Thank you very much Tasha! You always jump to read my writing first, I really appreciate that!

[Tasha]

You're welcome I love your writings!