Illusion

There,
Gone.

Author's Note

I thought of this on a five hour car ride when I was writing poetry instead of working on homework. Oops. Anyway, I hope you like my simplistic idea!

Reviews

[floralhorror]

a lot of people think art should be extravagant and lasting. But that's not true. The most amazing pieces, I think, are something small, and transient. A fleeting glance. This, i believe, is true art. It's beautiful in it's simplicity.
Wonderful, amazing and lovely

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

Floral i am sorry for any misunderstanding.
Bye

[Phillitup]

thanks

[quinfinn]

this is the most depth i have ever witnessed in two words, profound and simplistic at the same time. clever idea!

[Phillitup]

thank you very much!

[blegh]

who ah...so short lol
this is the shortest poem Ive ever read in my life

[Phillitup]

thanks?

[Ambereen]

2 words and a thousand thoughts ... Beautiful

[Phillitup]

thanks

[Em]

I LOVE this. So simple, but amazing at the same time. I like that you only used two small words for this piece, and the most perfect words to describe "illusion"This is just wonderful.

[Phillitup]

Thank you very much! I'm glad you enjoyed it!

[ms. barrie]

brilliant, you definitely captured in two short lines, "illusion" -- an elusive moment of wonder, hope, etc. -- i agree, this is amazing in its simplicity. great write...thanks for sharing :)

[Phillitup]

thanks for reviewing!

[ms. barrie]

you welcome :) - pen on!

[Ezekiel Silver]

Nice poem. I like the simplicity behind it, though I do think it would have helped if it was a little longer. Good work all the same!

[Phillitup]

thanks

[Lina Grey]

leaves everything to the reader, eh? love it hunny. speak in volumes it does :)

[Phillitup]

thanks!

[rnuff]

love it..speaks in volume

[LadyInk]

I really liked the way that those two simple words could create a story I'm my mind! You certainly proved that it doesn't take extravagant to be magic..!

[LadyInk]

*In ( sorry for the typo...)

[Phillitup]

thanks!

[Chavon]

poof!

[Phillitup]

:)