Why?

Why?

A Poem by Phillitup



Why is the world cruel?
Why do I try so hard?
Why am I writing this?
Why do I even write?
Why do I care what you think?
Why?

© 2013 Phillitup


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why indeed, Dell? because we all suffer the question why from time to time and it is a necessary question. i have felt the tuggings of this very enigmatic pulse within throughout my life. it never ends, so we just muddle through and either accept things for what they are or try to bring about change. excellent piece of prose!

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Phillitup

11 Years Ago

thanks



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I ask myself so many questions every day and i can never find answers but sometimes that is the best way, sometime you don't want to know the answer even if you have been pondering questions for your whole life... Sometimes it’s better to not ask questions and just go through with the flow of life, take risks and see where they lead you... that’s what I do anyway :P

Anyway... I don't know why you write but I know that I write because it is a way to use my imagination and my strangeness for good... Writing is a gift that everyone here has and you need to support and nourish your gift :) Don’t you dare ever stop writing Dell  I will literally cry that day!

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Phillitup

11 Years Ago

:)

Thanks for all your kind words. It's always good to know when someone likes my writi.. read more
Lozzie

11 Years Ago

Thank you :) I won't if you won't :P And yeah, i know completely of the feeling of insecurity, thing.. read more
I feel like I have asked myself every one of these questions. The world is always going to be cruel. If you try hard, that just means, you're a determined person and I think that's one of the best attributes someone can have. And I think we all write because it lets us create our own little worlds where we can make amazing things happen and bring joy to other people :) Great job!

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Phillitup

11 Years Ago

Thanks!
So many questions starting with why go unanswered.
Great Job!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Phillitup

11 Years Ago

thanks
Such questions can only be answered from within. Well, actually, you could ask philosophers and scientists who have dedicated their lives to answering these and many other tough questions, but not even they really know the answer. I don't believe the world is black and white, cause and effect. I don't believe these questions have straight answers. The world is too complicated, interwoven, for the why to have an easy answer. If you want to find peace with the curiousity inside you, you'll have to do a lot of deep thinking, I think. Form your own opinion. Take charge of yourself, and decide why you are who you are. Keeping wondering, my friend ;)

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Phillitup

11 Years Ago

Thank you very much for your kind and thoughtful words. I agree. Thanks again!
Lina Grey

11 Years Ago

my pleasure :)
So sweet and funny , really why ?? tell me ?! :P

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Phillitup

11 Years Ago

I have no clue. There are to many unanswered questions in the world! :)
Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )

11 Years Ago

Yes absolutely !
The world is cruel because men are beasts. We try so hard because we wish to be more than beasts. You are writing this because you wish for others to know you strive with the beast inside yourself. You write because it gives your heart and thoughts voice. I was not aware that you cared at all what I thought but thank you so much for that consideration. I hope I have answered the last question. I KNOW I have answered honestly.

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Phillitup

11 Years Ago

Thanks. I agree, we as humans can do nothing but try to realize the demon within us all and attempt .. read more
Fabian G. Franklin

11 Years Ago

It wasn't thought out at all Dell...I just responded with my honest beliefs. Shakespeare said (or on.. read more
Very thought provoking questions Dell. To answer why do you even write is because you have talent and a purpose. Don't stop writing.
~Tadha

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Phillitup

11 Years Ago

Thanks! But you spelled your name wrong.
 Tasha

11 Years Ago

You're welcome :) I realized that but I can't change it.

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I am 14-years-old. I find inspiration all over the place: memories, ideas, things I notice. I like believing in things that others find impossible. I think that's the way I hope for a better future. .. more..

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