Why?

Why is the world cruel?
Why do I try so hard?
Why am I writing this?
Why do I even write?
Why do I care what you think?
Why?

Reviews

[quinfinn]

why indeed, Dell? because we all suffer the question why from time to time and it is a necessary question. i have felt the tuggings of this very enigmatic pulse within throughout my life. it never ends, so we just muddle through and either accept things for what they are or try to bring about change. excellent piece of prose!

[Phillitup]

thanks

[Sam.]

Why do you write too good? Haha, just kidding. You're awesome :)

[Phillitup]

Thanks :)

[blegh]

short and confusingly nice :)

[Phillitup]

thanks

[Unicorn Princess]

I agree that is so true!!!!!! I ask myself some of those questions every day. And I wish I know the worlds secrets.

[Phillitup]

:)

Thank you!

[LadyInk]

In a way it's because the world is cruel that we try so hard, and we write because sometimes it's the only way of saying what we think, and share are voice and thoughts. And in a way, we might never really know why we care so much about what others think, but truth is, we all do...

[Phillitup]

so true...thanks for the review!

[Elvis Gilley]

because my friend you're a writer that's why. great job keep up the good work

[Phillitup]

thanks!

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

Its the logical stream of suppressed thought that would formulate into these 6 lines -your poem!
You care what i think because you are an integral part of me...as i of you...and we ...a small but important part of the magnanimous infinity..
while seeking the knowledge that lies latent....and reveling in the revealing truth that the ...Universe....lies within you.

[Phillitup]

Thanks! Those are some cool thoughts!

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

Yes its profound Vedic philosophy that the world has forgotten...2013 was not the end of the world...it was the end of human ignorance...those seeking knowledge would get it...and darkness would be dispelled in shafts of pure white rays of the cosmos...and there would be carrier waves...and there would be receivers...like radios...and there would be a million channels to tune in to...some even all at the same time..:)
Thx..
Be blessed!

[Toni]

This is short, but short to where it has meaning.
Why do we feel the way that we do?
Because it's what the human emotion can hold.
I really liked it, and the reason you asked 'Why do I care what you think', because you want to know that your work is appreciated.
Well Done
xoxo

[Phillitup]

thanks, I appreciate your review! I always like to hear when people enjoy what I write.

[Toni]

No problem! c:
I did!

[krish]

quite different..,but nice...

[Phillitup]

thanks!

[Lexi]

Well that is just life, why did it end up like this, nobody knows and all we can do is ask questions

[Phillitup]

thanks