Stanzas

lines and lines
of words
that spread across
a page
so barren is their resting place
so dull
they contain no truth

spreading

out like

special stars that
shoot across the sky
I must be free of
stanzas

Reviews

[Fabian G. Franklin]

Well, block writes are free of stanzas...prose is free of stanzas...poetry is free...period. Poetry is feeling and the ability to express that feeling in words...nothing less... or it CAN be a vehicle for a story such as an ode or an epic. All the canvas is yours so paint your masterpiece.

[Phillitup]

Thank you so much!

[Coyote Poetry]

"I must be free of
stanzas"
Nice set-up of poem and thoughts. I like the ending. Thank you for sharing the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Phillitup]

thanks

[MOON]

Lovely write , you have captured this well

[Phillitup]

thanks

[Icelanna]

I like this, the orthography of the page is unique which i like. I like how the last line wishes to be free of stanzas yet the poem is actually written in a stanza at the end (I don't know if this was intended or not) but I like the idea of wanting to break free :)
Lovely flow and good piece x
Love to you x

[Phillitup]

Yes, it is intended. Thanks!