Books

dusty cover
puff of life
tearing bind
infinite strife
inked on words
meanings like a knife
a book I hold
story shrill as a fife

Author's Note

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XXX 1/5/13

Reviews

[Fabian G. Franklin]

I like the poem but it feels a bit strained as if you placed the rhyme above the content. There should be (in a rhyming poem) an equal balance of rhyme TO content. This is a very short write and doesn't allow a great deal of analysis. But I'll read a few of your other works to get a more detailed perspective of your individual vision. I see that you are a young writer and I like to encourage all young writers. Writing has been a passion of mine for many years, particularly poetry. I was quite impressed by your profile summary. You seem very bright and creative. Keep writing.

[Phillitup]

thank you very much for your analysis! I appreciate that a lot!

[Emmalisa Tilli]

I agree, but I personally love your short little poem - it does describe "books" in general. I think you should try and write some more. I love the idea :)

[Tasha]

Wow Dell, this is amazing. Words can't explain this it was amazing. Keep up the amazing work.

[Phillitup]

thanks

[Tasha]

You're welcome

[Pawprints]

"Puff of life."
That's a great line. I don't think I'll ever be able to leave books for any electronic device that allows me to read on it. :p

[Phillitup]

thanks