Exhausted
A Poem by
Phillitup
Weary eyes
With a soul to match.
Heavy breathing
And the sigh of despair.
Done,
Through with the work.
Complete
Or not I am done.
No more
Work.
I lay
Exhausted.
© 2013 Phillitup
Author's Note
Just something I thought of. I am exhausted right now.
XXX 1/3/13
Reviews
Your writing amazes me
I REALLY like it
Posted 11 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
I can relate to this...you've summed it up quite nicely. Thanks for sharing this with us.
-kimmer
Posted 11 Years Ago
I can relate to this...you've summed it up quite nicely. Thanks for sharing this with us.
-kimmer
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
11 Years Ago
And thank YOU for reviewing! :)
11 Years Ago
My pleasure.
I like this a great deal...you capture the feeling well.
Posted 11 Years Ago
I like this a great deal...you capture the feeling well.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
I know exactly how you feel. Sounds like everyone needs to go out on holiday at least once a day!!
Posted 11 Years Ago
I know exactly how you feel. Sounds like everyone needs to go out on holiday at least once a day!!
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
great discriptions. the feeling comes across very nicely
Posted 11 Years Ago
great discriptions. the feeling comes across very nicely
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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Added on January 3, 2013
Last Updated on January 3, 2013
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Phillitup FL
About
I am 14-years-old. I find inspiration all over the place: memories, ideas, things I notice. I like believing in things that others find impossible. I think that's the way I hope for a better future. ..
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