The End Approaches

This is written by one of my friends who denies me every time I tell her to get an account. This is copyright my friend.

The world flies around me.
A glowing ball of life.
I stand alone.
An untouched figure of death.
Shadows encroach the world.
Sending out its dark tendrils of despair.
Filling our hearts with sorrow.
The end approaches.
But death is just the beginning.

Author's Note

This is my friends work, not mine. Give honest feedback so that I can send it to her.

Reviews

[Pax]

death is just the beginning.
~ i always believed on that saying... well until then we have to face every obstacle that comes across with a soulful heart..
a very nice work my friend...

[disheveledApathy]

How true, death is not the end, only the beginning of an adventure, the greatest adventure of all. Fantastic poem, your friend really should join writers cafe.

[RavenWells]

Your friend did a wonderful job. It uses vivid imagery and sends the reader to another place. :)

[Phillitup]

Thank you. I'll be sure to tell her.