Prologue

Prologue

A Chapter by Phillitup

All who can become one with themselves may ensure an adventure beyond compare full of courage, magic, and discovery.


© 2012 Phillitup


Author's Note

Phillitup
I know it's a short prologue. I know it's mysterious.

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Cliffhanger ! :D

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Phillitup

11 Years Ago

thanks
Even though it's a short prologue you started your story off with some intensity, really drew your reader in.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Phillitup

11 Years Ago

thanks
profound and short. So let the games begin.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Phillitup

11 Years Ago

haha...yup!
Okay for first of all this sounds aawesome :) It doens't matter how shortthe porlogue is as long as they draw the audience in and leave them guessing and that is exactly what you have done :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Phillitup

11 Years Ago

Thanks a million! I hope you like it! Also, I read chapter two and left a review, genius!
I'm in! let's go! :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Makes me wonder what i'm in for.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I'm exited already!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I think that it is perfectly short. It has just enough not to reveal too much and is mysterious. It makes the reader want to read more.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like it! Although I imagined it as one of those short sentences you see in the page before the book begins. However, I like it, short and sweet and I'm moving to chapter one :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

So intriguing....

Next chapter! ^^

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Phillitup

11 Years Ago

:)
Felicity's Eve

11 Years Ago

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