I thought of this poem and started writing. I think it's my longest poem on this website but I'm not sure. Anyhow, I hope you like it and enjoy reading it. I would appreciate comments and reviews.
Best regards,
Dell
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(is your heart like glass, fragile,
that is broken by hate
so that it shatters)
you really hit on my nerve with this, i know every word of what you mean, i've been through this and believe me it sucks.
great write, i love yournew way with rhyming, well done!
Crystal Clear
(Review for Change the World Competition) It can be so hard and frustrating trying to see through the eyes of another. Excellent craft and honesty in this work and you have captured the love and emotion magnificently.
"I want you to be beautiful again
beautiful like a lake that's
crystal clear"
This last stanza was beautiful and my favorite, it really brought your whole poem together :)
Well done!
(is your heart like glass, fragile,
that is broken by hate
so that it shatters)
you really hit on my nerve with this, i know every word of what you mean, i've been through this and believe me it sucks.
great write, i love yournew way with rhyming, well done!
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