By Your Side

By Your Side

A Poem by Phillitup

Never leaving
Always changing
Watching your days
Pass by me
While I'm here
And my life is waiting
For me
I'm supporting you
But you don;t turn to help me
Why
I have no clue
Leaving me like that
I should just leave you
I'm gone
I've decided
I will live my own life
And not by your side

© 2012 Phillitup


Author's Note

Phillitup
I don't know exactly why I wrote this, but I did. I've never really felt like this before. I've never had a chance to but for some reason I was just inspired.

My Review

Would you like to review this Poem?
Login | Register




Featured Review

Oh wow, this is really great! I can totally relate to this. There's an ex-boyfriend of mine that I always supported and was there for. But in return all he did was hurt me and flirted with every single girl that he came in contact with. See, I haven't changed but he's the one that's been doing all of the changing. Maybe the reason you wrote this is to help some people on this website with these issues, to relate and realize that they need to decide to let go of that person. Again, you done an excellent job! :)

"I'm gone
I've decided
I will live my own life
And not by your side."----Wow! Strong words! I love it :P

Ashley Rivers--Dream BIG and you'll win BIG ;)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Phillitup

12 Years Ago

I'm glad you can easily relate to this. It's sad that some of us have to go through this kind of thi.. read more
Call_Me_Miss_Imperfect

12 Years Ago

Yeah I know exactly what you mean! Of course :)



Reviews

It is hard to be there for someone with everything you have and then they never return the favor. It is hard to give and never have that given back to you. Great piece!

Posted 10 Years Ago


this is sad!, i like the poetry, but this is sad, beautiful though!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Sometimes leaving and moving on is the best option....nice write

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This poem is well written because it carries a message which is handed to the reader in the most simplest of ways.
There is a quench in this poem. A quench to release the feelings which are spoken about (in this poem).
Just try to keep a rhythm. Try to tap your nails while reading this piece. If you can catch a tune then you know you did a good job.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This makes me think of the protagonist as a parent, or friend who's friend/child is selfishly taking advantage of the protagonist who is the parent/friend, so, the protagonist has finally had enough and left said other person.
This poem seems like a great encouragement to people who are being used like that, telling them to step up and live their life.
Well done, I like this one and the picture is pretty cute. ^^

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i can relate completely

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This concept is a normal progression in our lives. A healthy independence and self realization.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is so sad! But this is a good poem. It makes me think of that Wolf guy. Thanks; I enjoyed it.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Savior of Time

12 Years Ago

The Wolf from last year's play.
Phillitup

12 Years Ago

ah...that is what I thought but I wasn't sure
Savior of Time

12 Years Ago

Yeah, defiantly him. >:
This poem is easy to relate to. Good job!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


Share This
Email
Facebook
Twitter
Request Read Request
Add to Library My Library
Subscribe Subscribe


Stats

136 Views
11 Reviews
Rating
Added on December 16, 2012
Last Updated on December 16, 2012

Author

Phillitup
Phillitup

FL



About
I am 14-years-old. I find inspiration all over the place: memories, ideas, things I notice. I like believing in things that others find impossible. I think that's the way I hope for a better future. .. more..

Writing

Related Writing

People who liked this story also liked..


Chapter One Chapter One

A Chapter by Phillitup