Dark Night

In the dark night
Black as tar
Glint of a knife
Can not shine
No light
But the sharp stars
Far away
That don't provide
Quite enough
No moon
Eerie dark
Scream
No one can hear you

Reviews

[Pawprints]

I like the idea of a knife that cannot glint...Nice poem!

[Phillitup]

Thank you very much!

[Pawprints]

you're very welcome :)

[Sam]

Nice poem, very creative. I like it.


100/100

[Phillitup]

Thank you very much Sam!

[Empty Spaces]

i like this, very creative

[Phillitup]

thanks you

[Jocie]

this is creepy man, ur starting to make me think ur true identity is an alien.

[Phillitup]

lol! :)

[Jocie]

no joke dude.

[Phillitup]

I'm quite human

[Jocie]

I seriously hope so....XD