You

You
In the darkest shades of gray
You
In the everlasting day
You
In the darkness that controls me

You
With your thousand reasons
You
In your smirking treason
You
Are wider the toiling sea

Don't you ever look back
On the sad, sad days
You created
Humiliated
Me

Just leave me all behind
Depress me I won't mind
But just when your glad
Remember I'm sad
All because of you

You
In the darkest hour
You
Have no super power
You
Along with the dark forces

You
And your sour addictions
You
Moderate don't listen
You
Treat me like I'm no human too


Just leave me all behind
Depress me I won't mind
But just when your glad
Remember I'm sad
All because of you

Author's Note

This is the beginning of a really bad attempt at a song. It sounds good when sung the way I thought of it....but I can't share that with you all

Tell me what you think.

Reviews

[Pawprints]

I was going to say that it sounds like I really great song. I'm around twelve too, but I don't think I could ever write as good as this!

[Phillitup]

Thanks...:)

[Mir]

This is really good, written anyway! I bet it sounds even better sung! :)

[Phillitup]

Thanks!

[Mir]

Your welcome! :)

[Jocie]

I LOVE IT!
Would totally want to here this on the radio
u should call 92.3 and subjest it to the title maybe they will have someone sing i for u on the radio
it's possible.

[Phillitup]

Thanks...it's not that good though....:) Glad you liked it.

[Jocie]

but it is.to me.
you really should publish it
and I did not like it
I LOVED IT!

[Phillitup]

:)

[Jocie]

thank you for posting it...:D