Harsh Words

Death

Alone

Gone

No return

Loser

Doofus

Goner

Four-eyes

Harsh

Words

I've

Heard

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Loveless]

good poem:)

[Coyote Poetry]

Words can hurt another person feelings. I learn to be positive. Negative words and thoughts lead us to no-where. People who speak foolish words and thoughts. Need to not pay attention to. A honest and direct poem. Thank you for sharing the excellent poem.
Coyote

[RachelReaper]

You can easily tell how you feel in these few words. great write

[ms. barrie]

i love the style format you chose to write this in. each line building into a climax, till at last it has relaxed into its brilliant ending, great write. thanks for sharing

[angelface13]

This is extremely sad...but i didn't feel much of the emotions myself. You have to write so that everybody feels the same emotions, and ends up thinking that the character is them.

[Phillitup]

Hmmm....your the only person who hasn't felt it.

[angelface13]

I'm a tough critic...I hope that that helps some people.

[Phillitup]

it will...

[Jocie]

This to me seems kinda rude to say, to me. Not starting crap just saying.
Maybe u could have said it with some ---> :)

[Phillitup]

believe me, it helps my writing grow, but thanks

[Jocie]

:) welcome, i guess.

[Riley Mistwood]

sad poem :(

[Phillitup]

thanks...i think. I guess I captured the emotion correctly. Thank you for taking time to review...

[Riley Mistwood]

You absolutely did.

[David Scott]

Words are so much more than their definitions...
I get it.
Be well.

[Phillitup]

:)

[Salar Majak]

i hate this kind of words, they hurt you so deep

[AYVID N]

Harsh words sure equal death of soul. I appreciate. A lot. Keep it up. Regards, DN

[Phillitup]

thanks

[Jocie]

heard or have been said to u...because I have been called much much worse..such as a f***** sl** a** b**** and more

[Phillitup]

believe me, those r some of the words i kept out

[Jocie]

ok..r u being called these things...because I'm sure they just jealous of u..ur proabably pretty

[Phillitup]

no...im not, but thanks

[Phillitup]

i dont hear the ones you mention often, and always by people who dont know me...those r the ones i ignore.

[Jocie]

ur not pretty...u dnt think....i'm sure u r...i'll check out ur photos.

[Jocie]

oh ok