I Wonder

I wonder
Wonder where you've been
What you've seen
Wonder what your story is
Who you'll finally tell
Wonder who you've lost
What you've given
Wonder your dreams
Your future
Wonder your fate
Your life
I wonder

Reviews

[Ashley G.]

I like the concept of it.

[Mir]

I found this very unique! :)

[ms. barrie]

ah i enjoyed this poem, the style format and the whole concept of it: " i wonder". you have remarkable talent to be able to convey is so few words to vividly paint a picture of sensitivity, thought provoking poems. great write :) - thanks for sharing

[Phillitup]

thanks

[Coyote Poetry]

Few people will tell you the real story of a life. Few can be trusted. Never know what a person done or will do? I like the use of repetition in the poem. Gave the poem reason and purpose. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

[angelface13]

This is very interesting. The world is a great thing to wonder about...so many things to discover. I would add a bit more flow at the end. It was very smooth up until then. But the ending is the last thing that they read:):):)

[Phillitup]

i'll think about it

thanks

[angelface13]

:3

[Jocie]

ask me questions if u wanna know :)
very nicely writen.

[AYVID N]

Everything is a wonder in life and life is wonderful. I like this. DN

[Lunette Lariz]

This is simple yet WONDERful. Haha, keep writing! :)

[Anonymous Girl]

Aha!! Nice one! That's what happens to me, rarely though.
I like it :)
Keep writing ^^

[Pax]

A wondering thought... now i also wonder?? lol...
nice thoughts my friend.