Raindrops

Raindrops

A Poem by Phillitup
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How I love the rain.

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Rain drops
Kiss my cheeks
Wet
Streaming through my hair
Running to the street
Arms outstretched
To catch the beautiful,
cold,
clear,
raindrops

© 2012 Phillitup


Author's Note

Phillitup
I have forever been in love with standing in the rain, wet, getting wetter by the minute. Especially when the rain is cold. Right now, I'm craving that feeling.

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nice. cute little simple poem, which i love. nice imagery, captured the feeling and stuff. first place.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Phillitup

12 Years Ago

thanks
I love the imagery in this. I can see it mostly because that is exactly what I do when it starts raining. Everyone at school thinks I'm a freak because I'll get up and go stand in the rain spinning in circles while I stare at the sky.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A warm Summer day and rain is cool. Good description allowed the reader to fall into the desire of the words. Thank you for sharing the excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Phillitup

12 Years Ago

thanks for reviewing!
I loved it! I just wish that rain was always as pretty as you make it seem. good job making me see what you see!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Phillitup

12 Years Ago

:)
So beautiful! You make me love the rain. A cute little poem. Please keep giving us more such as these. Regards, DN

Posted 12 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Phillitup

12 Years Ago

Thank you!

Will do!
wow this is awesome...I always run and jump in mud puddles after the rain stops or I stand outside in my bathing suit and dance.lol. Nicely writen.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Phillitup

12 Years Ago

thanks
Jocie

12 Years Ago

any time. :)
I love that feeling too, such great imagery.

Posted 12 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Phillitup

12 Years Ago

thanks! I'm glad some people can relate. :)
 Tasha

12 Years Ago

you're welcome!
Wow, it felt positive. A fascination of a child to the nature, to the rain. Do keep writing!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

very nice poem

Posted 12 Years Ago


nice imagery!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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