Raindrops
A Poem by
Phillitup
How I love the rain.
Rain drops Kiss my cheeks Wet Streaming through my hair Running to the street Arms outstretched To catch the beautiful, cold, clear, raindrops
© 2012 Phillitup
Author's Note
I have forever been in love with standing in the rain, wet, getting wetter by the minute. Especially when the rain is cold. Right now, I'm craving that feeling.
Reviews
nice. cute little simple poem, which i love. nice imagery, captured the feeling and stuff. first place.
Posted 11 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
I love the imagery in this. I can see it mostly because that is exactly what I do when it starts raining. Everyone at school thinks I'm a freak because I'll get up and go stand in the rain spinning in circles while I stare at the sky.
Posted 11 Years Ago
I love the imagery in this. I can see it mostly because that is exactly what I do when it starts raining. Everyone at school thinks I'm a freak because I'll get up and go stand in the rain spinning in circles while I stare at the sky.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
A warm Summer day and rain is cool. Good description allowed the reader to fall into the desire of the words. Thank you for sharing the excellent poem.
Coyote
Posted 12 Years Ago
A warm Summer day and rain is cool. Good description allowed the reader to fall into the desire of the words. Thank you for sharing the excellent poem.
Coyote
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
12 Years Ago
thanks for reviewing!
I loved it! I just wish that rain was always as pretty as you make it seem. good job making me see what you see!
Posted 12 Years Ago
I loved it! I just wish that rain was always as pretty as you make it seem. good job making me see what you see!
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
So beautiful! You make me love the rain. A cute little poem. Please keep giving us more such as these. Regards, DN
Posted 12 Years Ago
So beautiful! You make me love the rain. A cute little poem. Please keep giving us more such as these. Regards, DN
2 of 2 people found this review constructive.
12 Years Ago
Thank you!
Will do!
wow this is awesome...I always run and jump in mud puddles after the rain stops or I stand outside in my bathing suit and dance.lol. Nicely writen.
Posted 12 Years Ago
wow this is awesome...I always run and jump in mud puddles after the rain stops or I stand outside in my bathing suit and dance.lol. Nicely writen.
12 Years Ago
any time. :)
I love that feeling too, such great imagery.
Posted 12 Years Ago
I love that feeling too, such great imagery.
2 of 2 people found this review constructive.
12 Years Ago
thanks! I'm glad some people can relate. :)
12 Years Ago
you're welcome!
Wow, it felt positive. A fascination of a child to the nature, to the rain. Do keep writing!
Posted 12 Years Ago
Wow, it felt positive. A fascination of a child to the nature, to the rain. Do keep writing!
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
very nice poem
Posted 12 Years Ago
very nice poem
nice imagery!
Posted 12 Years Ago
nice imagery!
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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Added on November 23, 2012
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Phillitup FL
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I am 14-years-old. I find inspiration all over the place: memories, ideas, things I notice. I like believing in things that others find impossible. I think that's the way I hope for a better future. ..
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